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If You're Here, Who's Running Hell?

September 7, 2009
By Madalou2012 BRONZE, Chattanooga, Tennessee
Madalou2012 BRONZE, Chattanooga, Tennessee
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We had the American dream
We had everything
You ripped it at the seams
We had everything
Things just aren’t right, now
You’re gone, now
I just don’t know, now
You’re gone now
I’m stranded here alone
We had everything
This house is not a home
We had everything
My life came crashing down
You’re gone now
You left without a sound
You’re gone now
I’m sore, I’m aching
We had everything
Hearts are meant for breaking
We had everything
Family isn’t important to you
You’re gone now
Sorry, we’re an inconvenience
You’re gone now
You could’ve told us
We had everything
Except trust
We had nothing


The author's comments:
It's kind've an ode to my dad...

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on Apr. 15 at 1:13 am
12376-astravo BRONZE, Centennial, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
" A writer is a writer not because she writes well and easily, because she has amazing talent, or because everything she does is golden. A writer is a writer because, even though there is no hope, even when nothing you do shows any sign of promise, you keep writing anyway." - Junot Diaz

" Overnight Success is almost a myth. Half of this industry is luck, and half is the refusal to quit" - Victoria Schwab

Bro. You did so good. I can relate to this but with my birth mom. So yeah. Great Job. Keep up the great work.

on Mar. 25 2019 at 9:39 am
Xx_KodaWolf_xX, Winston-Salem, North Carolina
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I can relate to this so much... especially the last line

on Dec. 12 2014 at 1:25 pm
AllSoPlayfulWhenYouDemonize BRONZE, Richmond, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Our passion is our strength."
-Billie Joe Armstrong

Same.  But I like it.

on Oct. 3 2013 at 8:54 am
This is sort of how I feel, too. My father has never shown that he cares for his family and sometimes I just wish I had a real dad. Great work, it's very emotional!

on Sep. 20 2009 at 6:08 pm
Brittaner DIAMOND, Edenton, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"words are just songs without the corny elevator music behind them"
-Me (random thought)

Awsome. I can see all the diffrent emotions you felt and everything. Keep up the awsome work

on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:53 pm
emo.panda101 BRONZE, Fitchburg, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
iam the greatest dork!!

i love this but i dont get it