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It Was You

June 29, 2010
By lucybugg101 PLATINUM, Concord, New Hampshire
lucybugg101 PLATINUM, Concord, New Hampshire
21 articles 10 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself, don't take anyone's shit, and never let them take you alive.” -Gerard Way

I’m dying inside,
One piece at a time,
But my pieces are running out,
Got any to spare,
Can I take them as mine,
To help me rebuild my soul;

Now that you’re gone,
What am I to do,
A part of me died,
That part of my was you;

Please give me hope,
That I can rebuild my life,
Guide me to safety,
Help me put down my knife,
I’m missing you baby;

Now that you’re gone,
What am I to do,
A part of me died,
That part of me was you;

Now that you’re gone,
What am I to do,
A part of me died,
That part of me was you;

A part of me died,
And that part of me was you,
It was you.

The author's comments:
I wrote this song for my friend who recently passed.

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This article has 7 comments.

ajilla BRONZE said...
on Jul. 25 2010 at 6:03 pm
ajilla BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
2 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
everything happens for a reason

wow this was really deep... and im really sorry about your friend... i've been there too


on Jul. 24 2010 at 9:23 am
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1979 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

aw, man im really sorry...


This was good tho. very emotional n really nicee...

on Jul. 24 2010 at 12:05 am
dreamer9492 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
11 articles 0 photos 52 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Dreaming is what makes the world go round"

this was really good! keep writing =) and i'm sorry about you friend =( can you comment my stuff i would greatly appreciate it =)

on Jul. 23 2010 at 2:19 pm
his_country_girl SILVER, Goshen, Indiana
8 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Reality is almost always wrong."-House

"Don't worry when you feel something, worry when you don't."- SVU

this is a very good song. you did great. i'm really sorry about your friend. =(

on Jul. 23 2010 at 12:15 am
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Omg this is great and im sorry about your friend :( if you could please rate and comment on my work that wuld be awesome especially to anonymous! thanks and ur really good!!!

on Jul. 22 2010 at 6:39 pm
DifferentTeen PLATINUM, Seaford, Delaware
32 articles 2 photos 329 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There’s no such thing as true love, just spurts of insanity—falling over and over again, thinking that won’t happen to me"

I'm sure your friend really appreciate this.

I thought it was great :]

on Jul. 21 2010 at 5:58 pm
peacemaker14 SILVER, Hubbard, Oregon
6 articles 2 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"in my life I've learned that growing up is hard and head banging is crucial"- hayley williams

it was really good although its a little repetitive,

like too reptitive

but still with a little editing i think it can go far

P.S i'm so sorry your friend died