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Dear Mommy

August 5, 2011
By JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
JTboiiDrama PLATINUM, Chicago, Illinois
27 articles 0 photos 46 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is what it is

I loved the way you tickled my feet and read to me till' I fell asleep. You kissed my head and made my bed and made sure I was all ways well fed. You gave me advice, made sure I was nice and when I was wrong you made me think twice. You all ways would try and you never did lie but some way some how I never did say goodbye.

The author's comments:
It hurts because it's the truth but I learn to go on in life. I know that i will have my chance to say goodbye properly.

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on Aug. 21 2011 at 1:06 pm
thetruthawaits94 SILVER, Duncan, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 351 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is not about waiting for the storm to pass, but learning to dance in the rain.

this has great feeling in it! I think you did a wonderful job! :) may i ask, why do you format all of your poems in this way (like in a paragraph)?

on Aug. 21 2011 at 11:04 am
JerseyGirl716 BRONZE, Central, New Jersey
2 articles 0 photos 92 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We gain strength, and courage, and confidence by each experience in which we really stop to look fear in the face... we must do that which we think we cannot." -Eleanor Roosevelt

I can feel your pain in your words; great job!

lissa_ GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 8:28 pm
lissa_ GOLD, Salt Lake City, Utah
16 articles 0 photos 63 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't stand for something you'll fall for anything."- Suckerpunch
"The purpose of life is to be a better version of yourself."- Lucy Hale

good job conveying emotion)= 

on Aug. 12 2011 at 5:35 pm
kaykaybeck PLATINUM, Petersburg, Michigan
24 articles 4 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life takes you somewhere, love helps you get there.

Aww :( really good job