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Behind Closed Doors

April 26, 2013
By Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
Kev-Girl SILVER, Plymouth, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
Life is a maybe. Death is for sure. Sin is the cause. Christ is the cure. :)

Love is the breath of God, and prayer is the melody that makes it sing.

If you cant annoy someone, there's no point in writing.

Love is overrated, marry for money.

Behind closed doors,
There's a nervous heart,
There's a child in need,
There are wounds and scars.

Behind closed doors,
Many tears are shed,
Many broken lives,
Many ones are dead.


The author's comments:
Chorus from a song I'm working on

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on May. 1 2013 at 8:05 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hey there! I like this, it really makes sense that you are planning to turn this into a song, that's a brilliant idea. I like the title, it's great. The rhythm in here is terrific! I think that it will really be special once it's extended and turned into a song. From what you have right now, this is going to be great, not that it isn't already, because right now it's spectacular. I like the story(s) in here, it/they are strong and powerful. It can be many different stories. You leave it open for the reader to relate to many different things. Good word choices. GREAT job.