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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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NinaQ GOLD said...
on Aug. 7 2012 at 7:40 am
NinaQ GOLD, Seattle, Washington
15 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Pick your heart up off the floor
Sometimes, there are things you can only do alone
You can cry for now but just become stronger the next day

I favorited this 2 years ago, i come back upon this again and it is just as beautiful, this is something I truely need to keep me away from someone who's held me back for the new sophmore school year <3 please keep writing and share with us

on Jul. 21 2012 at 6:29 pm
missattitude BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
DON'T you dare rember me the moment i start forgetting you.

I thought i was the only one who this had happened to... but thanks nice to know that i'm NOT alone!

on Jul. 1 2012 at 6:11 pm
orangeslice SILVER, Midland, Michigan
8 articles 3 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When once you have tasted flight, you will forever walk the earth with your eyes turned skyward, for there you have been, and there you will long to return."
-Leonardo da Vinci

"Somewhere, something incredible is waiting to be known."
-Carl Sagan

Wow, I love this. I had a friend like that, and it's nice to find something so relatable. Great work!

on Jun. 21 2012 at 2:20 pm
ALovelyGirl BRONZE, Dearborn Heights, Michigan
1 article 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don't wish to be everything to everyone, but I would like to be something to someone.

-Javan

I love how in the end you say you havent changed.

on Jun. 10 2012 at 11:05 am
msprincess SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
build a bridge and get over it

this poem is so decent! I like it the beginning part is so good I like the whole poem and how you reflect towards the end ..

Shey22 SILVER said...
on Jun. 6 2012 at 6:31 am
Shey22 SILVER, St. Marys, Georgia
6 articles 4 photos 4 comments
I can relate to this and love the fact that I'm not the only one. Thank you for sharing this with us :D

on Jun. 1 2012 at 8:50 pm
lookatdatsoul SILVER, Rio, Illinois
7 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
Forgive him, for he believes that the customs of his tribe are the laws of nature. ~George Bernard Shaw

This is a similar message to what I was trying to convey in my sonnet entitled "Then". 

AMAWHI said...
on May. 21 2012 at 10:37 am
This poem is so beautiful. You use good metaphors with a golden heart. You are definitely an amazing poem writer. Definitely keep writing.

on May. 18 2012 at 11:39 am
Nicole67 PLATINUM, Indianola, Washington
25 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Someday, someone will walk into your life and make you realize why it never worked out with anyone else."
"we often put up walls not to keep people out, but to see who cares to get through"
“Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter, and those who matter don't mind.”

I have already commented on this before but i love it so much haha. I can relate to it a lot because i used to have a friend and he changed but i never did.

stephan95 said...
on May. 18 2012 at 9:13 am

i felt the same way too about my so called _best friend_ this...

i totally get what u r going through

+great poem


on May. 17 2012 at 6:14 am
QueenOfMars GOLD, Mumbai, Texas
13 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"

I've felt the same way about my so-called best friend. I can connect to each line in your poem... Absolutely good. 

on May. 16 2012 at 7:32 am
AmieeHope-Sierra GOLD, Royston, Georgia
11 articles 0 photos 115 comments

Favorite Quote:
And There Will Come A Time, You'll See, With No More Tears. And Love Will Not Break Your Heart, But Dismiss Your Fears.

I love this poem so much i'm gonna tattoo this on my wrist for sure.

on May. 16 2012 at 7:16 am
mindless_dreaming BRONZE, Wyckoff, New Jersey
1 article 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"May make my heart as a millstone, set my face as a flint, Cheat and be cheated, and die: who knows? We are ashes and we are dust." -Alfred, Lord Tennyson, 'Maud'

This is extraordinary, it touched me. 

TTTeeSS GOLD said...
on May. 16 2012 at 7:12 am
TTTeeSS GOLD, La Porte, Colorado
17 articles 6 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
There is no such thing as nothing, yet there is such thing as nothing, simply because there is nothing such as nothing.

This is really amazing. It touched me.

Special Me said...
on May. 1 2012 at 12:49 pm
I think it was a great poem. You used a great simile comparing how he changed to how the leaves fall off a tree. Also I could hear the Rhythm of the poem. It was a great poem.

erin m said...
on Apr. 30 2012 at 8:11 am

I liked this poem because it had good rhythm and flowed well.

I also liked it because it had personification


on Apr. 28 2012 at 7:02 am
MiaUnwritten GOLD, West Palm Beach, Florida
11 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let the eyes seek what the mind cannot
Let the eyes judge what the mind cannot
Let the eyes believe what the mind failed to"

Somehow I feel this piece was written for me. I so can relate, I mean really relate to what you wrote. So true too, I love it.

on Apr. 27 2012 at 8:35 pm
MusicRox1310 BRONZE, St. Charles, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It aint over 'till it's over" -Yogi Berra
"Don't Blink. Blink, and you're dead" -Dr. Who

This is such a truthful poem.  You conveyed your idea well and I can relate to this so much! Awesome job! This is going to my favorites!

on Apr. 27 2012 at 7:38 pm
LordOfTheStrings PLATINUM, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
21 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
Believe deep down in your heart that you are destined to do great things because you don't succeed by "It is what it is", you succeed by "It is what you make it".

I can really relate to this. I really hate when that happens, especially when it's happening right before your eyes and you can't do anything to stop it.

demos SILVER said...
on Apr. 25 2012 at 7:49 am
demos SILVER, Central Square, New York
6 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"real is what you are when you let your actions discribe you"
me

most truthful poem ive seen inna min