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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)


I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.


The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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on Nov. 14 2009 at 1:07 pm
Robkingett PLATINUM, Tallahassee, Florida
24 articles 0 photos 86 comments

Favorite Quote:
When I was little they called me a liar, but now I'm grown up, they call me a writer.

OMG! this poem is the best! wow! it's a shame it didn't make i in the mgizine. i love the first stanza the best.

on Nov. 10 2009 at 11:45 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:)

Change either makes ya or breaks ya

on Nov. 9 2009 at 9:33 pm
CaseyLeigh PLATINUM, Moraga, California
31 articles 6 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
My wish, for you, is that this life becomes all that you want it to.

This poem is amazing. I don't think there's a person who hasn't seen such change, been through such an experience.

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:51 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx for ur comment i appreciate it:)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:50 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanks:):)

on Nov. 9 2009 at 11:49 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Awe I'm sorry :(

I'm glad my poem could touch ur heart.

I write for others as much as I write for myself.

Marie92 said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 9:32 am
Marie92, Levelland, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When one door opens, another one closes."

Aww... my friends been through this. Its a great poem.

on Nov. 8 2009 at 8:46 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i liked this poem. it was really good

Kaity.. SILVER said...
on Nov. 8 2009 at 10:03 am
Kaity.. SILVER, Elliston, Virginia
8 articles 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
live your life to the fullest

I loved this pome...my brothers birthday is in september he died 6 years ago it is deff one on my fav pomes now ..thank you

samm987 said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:42 pm
Nice poem i like it

on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:05 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Ya ya ya lol I kno! but hey i wouldn't be me if i was all organized like u! I have to be unorganized to survive lol or atleast thats what i tell myself!;)

~Corrii~ said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 11:01 am
~Corrii~, Romeo, Alaska
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
look before you fall

Ya u do lol Miss Unorganized! you are horrible with that lol so how's Dan?

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:57 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

busy! lol i gotta start using a planner or somethin! lol

~Corrii~ said...
on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:55 am
~Corrii~, Romeo, Alaska
0 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
look before you fall

Awe this is a sweet but sad poem:( but anyways how r u? long time no hear!lol

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:26 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thank you:)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 10:25 am
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Thanx for ur comment:) i checked some of ur stuff out n ur rly good!

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:26 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

yes...and i really like that one "To Care". its really good....

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:17 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

did u read my poems A Gift and To Care? They're two of my "Christian" poems that i thought you might like! :)

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:09 pm
unbreakable SILVER, Newell, South Dakota
9 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
Too many people grow up. That's the real trouble with the world, too many people grow up. They forget. They don't remember what it's like to be 12 years old. They patronize, they treat children as inferiors. Well I won't do that.

you are very welcome..lol

on Nov. 5 2009 at 3:05 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

thannx:) i appreciate ur opinion!