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Remember Me

September 26, 2009
By TheGirlsGotDreams BRONZE, Cortland, New York
TheGirlsGotDreams BRONZE, Cortland, New York
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Hand with ribbon resembling someone trying to remember something


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on Oct. 17 2009 at 6:12 pm
TheGirlsGotDreams BRONZE, Cortland, New York
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Thank you sooo much for this.. I have a special project that i have been working on for months now and i need some constructive criticism to help improve all my drawings. I will improve and post it refined. Thax sooooo much

-lalalahahahadifferent

on Oct. 6 2009 at 2:35 pm
UlteriorMotives SILVER, Hope, Indiana
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It's sweet, but such a plain picture.

There's no background, not even shading. Might I make a suggestion, though? If you'd like to improve it any, my suggestion would be to color just the ribbon, or just the ring, to make it stand out more. My suggestion would be to color the ring, and make it the center of focus, especially considering the title of the work. =)