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The Black Rose Part One

September 26, 2009
By bluerose BRONZE, YEllow Springs, Ohio
bluerose BRONZE, YEllow Springs, Ohio
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I walked into my cabin ,i saw a bunk bed a small dresser and a desk with a mirror. my dad was standing in the door way "Luna if you need anything anything at all your mom and i are in the cabin down the trail". "I'll be fine dad its not like theres a mass murderer on the island" i said in a playfull tone. "fine just be careful" . He shut the door and left. My partent are naturelists and they came here to studie the animals and plants on the island. I thought about my best friend Claire ... shes in Ney york right now on vacationthe only reason she could afford it was because her mom married this rich guy she calls Jack*** Jackson. i unpacked my suit case and changed into black jeans, a navy blue tank top, black hoddie and skateboard shoes. I heard a scuffing soung coming from outside. i walked out and stopped dead in my tracks, There standing before me was the hottest guy ever. he had messy brown hair

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on Oct. 29 2009 at 11:23 am
Georgia Meagher, Sarasota, Florida
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hm... interesting. i wanna learn more about the random guy!

on Oct. 26 2009 at 5:57 am
Sixteen PLATINUM, Jaipur, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Its not denial. I'm just very selective about the reality I accept. - Calvin

ya..write more

on Oct. 10 2009 at 12:39 pm
dragonfan SILVER, Arcidia, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"Death truly makes an artist"

keep writing!!!! i want to find out what happens!