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Poor Molly

September 18, 2009
By Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

The strong November wind blew up dust from the road and chilled 12-year-old Molly’s legs as she walked. She pulled her shawl more tightly around her arms and blew on her freezing hands. The walk from the farm to Uncle Henry and Aunt Ingrid’s house was a long one. Molly was already tired from a day of sewing, sweeping, and cooking in the farmhouse, and this trip home exhausted her every day except Sunday.

Molly’s parents had died when she was seven, due to scarlet fever. So now Molly had to live with her aunt and uncle, who were strict, impoverished, and struggling to take care of their own children, Jack and Rebecca, never mind an orphan. Molly had been working at the farm for a year. She had never attended school, only learned a bit of reading and arithmetic at home. Uncle Henry worked long hours at a mill. Rebecca sewed for a tailor. Jack worked hard at the same farm as Molly.

The family was not happy by any means. Everyone was grumpy; grumpy from work, grumpy from hunger, grumpy from the cold. But then again, what did they have to be happy about? I suppose the fact that they were alive, but not much else. The children were afraid of their harsh parents/adoptive parents. They worked more than a child should have to. They were sick most of the year.

On this particular fall day, Molly was indeed sick with a cold. Her nose was stuffy, her throat scratchy. She had a cough, as well. The bitter cold matched with her thin frock was not helping. Little Molly arrived at her drafty house (or shack, as you may think of it). She entered into the single room. The logs were ablaze in the fireplace, yet it was still chilly. Aunt Ingrid was very grouchy.

“Finally, you’re home!” she said to Molly. “Hurry up and help me cut up potatoes.”

Bread, potatoes, and soup were mostly all that the family ate. It was okay, but not much variety. It certainly was better than starving.

Molly grabbed a knife and a spud quickly and began to peel. Her numb hands took forever.

“Will you get on with it?!” Aunt Ingrid shouted. “If you don’t get this dinner moving, you won’t have dinner!”

Molly promptly pushed away a tear and started to strip the potatoes as fast as she could. In fear, Jack and Rebecca tended to their chores in as orderly a fashion as possible. The supper of fried potatoes was ready on time, just as Uncle Henry returned from work.

The melancholy family sat at the pathetic, lopsided dinner table, prayed, and ate silently. No one dared say anything to make Henry or Ingrid mad. Molly’s face was pale from the chill. She dreamed of wearing a warm fur coat, thick woolen stockings, and a fleece hat.

Darkness came early now that it was late autumn, so bedtime came earlier. It seemed that just because it was aphotic outside, everyone got tired sooner in the evening. The tiny home had two full beds and one small cot. Rebecca and Molly shared a full bed. They quite liked sharing, because they could keep eachother warm. Molly changed into her thin nightdress and crawled under the old quilt. All she did was shiver for awhile. Her spot took a long time to heat up. Rebecca climbed into bed. The girls whispered for a bit until Aunt Ingrid screamed at them to be quiet.

Molly fell asleep with the awful thought of having to go through another cold, hard day tomorrow.

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This article has 14 comments.

on Feb. 11 2012 at 7:51 pm
AndyShea BRONZE, Louisville, Kentucky
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Beautiful, could go anywhere with this :) Keep writing please! Read and rate mine?

on Dec. 29 2011 at 7:31 pm
Rainbows47 BRONZE, Clarksville, Tennessee
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What a compelling story! You definitely developed your characters well resulting in a very clear understanding for your audience. For example, in those few short minutes of reading your story, I developed a relationship with the family simply because of the sympathy aroused from your descriptions of the family's life style. I would love to hear more!!! Keep writing!

on Sep. 10 2011 at 12:55 pm
Erecura PLATINUM, Eugene, Oregon
26 articles 11 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Hell is empty; all the devils are here."
The tempest

I really liked how descriptive it was. If you could check out some of my writing...?

on Jul. 28 2011 at 4:16 pm
SammyMarshall SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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That was very good your such a great author, nice story, check out mines it very good too! <3

on Dec. 13 2010 at 7:31 pm
hiddenangelz211 DIAMOND, Haverhill, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Live Laugh Love ~Unknown
I'm selfish, impatient, a little insecure but if you can't handle me at my worst then you sure as hell don't deserve me at my best ~Marilyn Monroe
Dream as if you'll live forever. Live as if you'll die today. ~James Dean

so inciteful! i love it! itz sooo sad tho :( read and rate mine?

on Oct. 15 2010 at 5:08 pm
DisneysChild BRONZE, Jackson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
(counting kills at battle for Helmsdeep)
Gimli: Legolas, Two already!
Legolas: I am on 17.
Gimli: I will not be outdone by a pointy-ear outscoring me. *kills another*
Legolas: *shoots two more arrows* 19!

Good! my name is molly, and that was the  reason i started, but i am glad i did.:) check out my stuff plz!

on Mar. 10 2010 at 2:01 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Sure, I'd love to check out your work. Thanks for the comment :)

on Mar. 9 2010 at 5:54 pm
alwayswriting14 SILVER, Northport, New York
7 articles 1 photo 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Everything makes sense yet nothing makes sense."

That was really good i was molly for a bit. Great work!!! Would you mind looking at some of my work? One in "Home is Anywhere" Historical fiction. Thank you.

on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:38 pm
Lauren101 SILVER, Mansfield, Texas
5 articles 3 photos 21 comments
That was good! :) Could you check this out and give me feedback? Thank you!
http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/historical_fiction/article/97138/The-Tripoli-Chronicle/

on Feb. 15 2010 at 5:34 pm
Lauren101 SILVER, Mansfield, Texas
5 articles 3 photos 21 comments
That was good :) Could you check this out and give me feedback? http ://www.teenink .com /fiction/historical_fiction/article/97138/The-Tripoli-Chronicle/

penguin35 said...
on Nov. 1 2009 at 4:56 pm
Thank you so much for the comment!

Keep writing :)

on Nov. 1 2009 at 2:33 pm
saratana95 BRONZE, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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I hope when I graduate COLLEGE that i'm half as good as you. Your very descriptive and you let your readers see what you see. I love it.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 5:45 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you again! I had no idea people would like my writing so much.

on Oct. 12 2009 at 5:15 pm
musiclover94 GOLD, Springboro, Ohio
15 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is uncertain. Eat dessert first.

Jeez, I like everything you write! This is so descriptive and sad. I like that it's just describing a day in the life of a poor, depressed girl. It's really good.