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Exerpt From Story: Trapped

October 18, 2009
By Anonymous

“Yes?,” I whispered, my breath brushing his cheek. I heard him gulp.

“I saw your face. Your eyes, and I crawled towards them, finding comfort there. I knew that I would be safe...Hope, I don’t know what I would’ve done if I hadn’t met you.” I felt my eyes widen slightly and then I felt the cool caress of his fingertips against my chin. They lifted it slightly and his lips brushed lightly against mine. Soft and gentle as a feather. A strange, indescribable heat billowed around us like puffs of smoke, encasing us separate from the rest of the world. My heart pounded in my throat and I felt myself smile truthfully, for the first time in a long while.



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on Mar. 20 2011 at 9:36 am
teacat749 BRONZE, Whitefish Bay, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
We do not quit playing because we grow old. We grow old because we quit playing.<br /> -Oliver Wendell Holmes

This is really well-written.

on Aug. 23 2010 at 11:30 pm
ChitChatCat BRONZE, Bay Shore, New York
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So yea. That was probably the best thing I've read tonight! I really loved it