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i love you?

December 4, 2009
By Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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during the school year, i really liked you... it is time to get to know you... *stis under tree with you*
"Hi..." "Whats your name?"
*looks up from book* "my name is Lilly" (wow.. a cutie is talking to me)
why dont we go to somewhere and talk... *takes her hand softly*
L- Ummm... surr, y not.. *takes hand* wat is your name?
"My name is Arrron"...
L-well it is very nice 2 meet u
A-*holds her close* "ur warm, make me warm too?"
L-"of course"... *holds Arrron*
A-well... wat wuld u say 2 a good bye kiss??? *bell rings*
L-I guess... *kisses his lips*
A- wow, that was amazing!!! *sayz goodbye*
(little did she know, she was never going to be with him again)
----weeks went by---- she sees him with another gurl... that is his girlfriend... they r done 4ever...

© Liaz M., Vineland, NJ

The author's comments:
this stroy shows that u need 2 get 2 know people 1st... dont jump the gun and hve fun... take things slowly..
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Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 11:07 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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its fine...i dont mind, it just that im not used to writting stories yet

i appreciate the feedback

Meli138 said...
on Apr. 13 2010 at 10:10 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings&quot;<br /> &quot;Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?&quot;

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Well thats awesome! You have a good idea here and after you get practice youll do great! im sorry i sounded so harsh earlier too.
Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:54 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
8 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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thanks...

im not used to writting stories. i know this one wasnt that good...i submitted another one, just waiting for approval

Meli138 said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 10:46 pm
Meli138, GP, Texas
0 articles 0 photos 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Like a bird with broken wings its not how high he flies but the song he sings&quot;<br /> &quot;Everybody live like its the last day you will ever see tell me tell me do you feel the pressure now?&quot;

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Ok no offense but if you're going to write a story atleast write in real words and not in "texting" form. Besides that it was an ok story kind of pointless really there were no depth.