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his last I love you

December 19, 2009
By SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!


As she sits at her cherry red table, the window open, letting a gentle breeze whisper through her golden hair. Does he love me? she thinks , letting her thoughts wonder through the unknown paths of her mind. why is he not back yet? these uneasy questions flow htrough her mind as she daydreams about hteir life together, their baby (who is on the way). she is scared that when he got on that plane in his camo-uniform he might not come back.His last "i love you" echos through her mind.


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i think i have obsesive writing sydome

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on Mar. 31 2010 at 8:39 pm
SpiceyRedPepper GOLD, League City, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Im not clumsy im just allergic to gravity!!!!

i just read it again and you are sooo right guess my grammar skill didn't kick in there!

paperflowers said...
on Mar. 28 2010 at 8:40 pm
paperflowers, Imaginary, Indiana
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would have been a 5 star if I wasn't a grammar freak :)

Tippleeee said...
on Jan. 16 2010 at 5:09 pm
Tippleeee, Liverpool, Other
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realy imaginative...i love it :)