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He Distracts Me...Pretty Good

April 5, 2011
By chrisoulakat PLATINUM, Tinley Park, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Stop waiting and be free. Of me- put me deep inside you and then go out in the world and live. Love the world and yourself in it, move through it offers no resistance, as though the world is your natural element." -The Time Traveler's Wife

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“Today we will be learning how to prove one triangle is congruent to another.” Ms. Walters explained. Eh, nobody cares. Triangles are pointless. I thought. Now let me think of something that’s not pointless… like Troy’s tan skin with dark chocolate eyes. His six pack shows through his shirt, and his muscles bring the strong side of him. Troy had this hideous voice back when he had no friends. Now he is popular. His voice is deep, and can soothe any girl’s heart. His dark brown hair brings out the opaque in his eyes. Troy is the calmest guy… I could hug him and feel on cloud nine. Feeling his muscles and the calmness in him makes my day whenever I see him.

The beauty in him is impeccable- like the Greek Gods created a male version of Aphrodite. Although he can be stubborn and rude, he has this sensitivity no other guy has. Troy will come to you and let you cry on his shoulder while he whispers in your ear something so … unbelievable. Troy is known to be one of the greatest friends when the world collapsed on you.

He has his flaws, but he has his perfections. Did I mention when I hold his hand while we dance, I feel safe. His built, huge fingers wrap around mind and it feels as though something in us has intertwined. Maybe some part of us has intertwined into something we can’t explain yet. I don’t know… Maybe if we do intertwine, I can almost feel the way his love comes in me. What if this happens? I hope it does. Or maybe we might actually-

-Grace?” Ms. Walter looks down at me from my desk. “Can you please explain to the class what the theorem Angle-Side-Angle is?”

Cr*p. I’m back to reality.

© Julia K., Old Tappan, NJ

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This happened to me before, and this is about one of my closest guy friends who I might possibly be falling for.
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Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 22 2011 at 7:51 am
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

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You're very welcome. :)
chrisoulakat PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 6:40 pm
chrisoulakat PLATINUM, Tinley Park, Illinois
48 articles 10 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop waiting and be free. Of me- put me deep inside you and then go out in the world and live. Love the world and yourself in it, move through it offers no resistance, as though the world is your natural element." -The Time Traveler's Wife

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lol thank you very much :)
Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 5:12 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

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Lol. Anywho I hope that sometime you will get the courage. :)
Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 21 2011 at 6:51 am
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

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Aw... too bad this didn't get published - then you wouldn't have had to tell him, you would have just shown him. :)
chrisoulakat PLATINUM said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 9:52 pm
chrisoulakat PLATINUM, Tinley Park, Illinois
48 articles 10 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stop waiting and be free. Of me- put me deep inside you and then go out in the world and live. Love the world and yourself in it, move through it offers no resistance, as though the world is your natural element." -The Time Traveler's Wife

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No, I am too shy! lol It's pretty obvious when I blush though. I'm just scared though
Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 4:52 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

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That's cute. Did you ever tell him you like him?
Hover BRONZE said...
on Apr. 20 2011 at 12:13 pm
Hover BRONZE, Mukwonago, Wisconsin
2 articles 0 photos 85 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sophistication isn't what you wear or who you know
Or pushing people down to get you where you wanna go
They didn't teach you that in prep school, so it's up to me,
But no amount of vintage dresses gives you dignity.
~Taylor Swift
*Defy Gravity!*

View profile

Awww... that's so sweet! Is this a true story? What happened after?

This is really good - not too long, and to the point. <3 Really good job!

P.S. Would you mind checking out some of my work?