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Great Expectations

October 30, 2011
By queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.


I think he’s cute, and funny.
I love the way walks and talks.
He walks with pride and he talks with no disguise
He embraces me tightly

And I embrace him as well.

His lips look sweet, I love them so much
I’m afraid to touch
Afraid that I might scare him away

I would’ve kissed him
Slowly, filled with passion.
But I can’t

I look back at my past
and think about my future
I think about what happened before,
and what might happen now

I don’t want him to walk away
from me.

I’m trying my hardest to forget
what I am
and what I’ve done.

If I take things too far. . .
It’ll ruin everything
If he ever found out who I was before

He would walk away with shame blocking his love
for me.
He would be afraid and ashamed

Not because he didn’t realize who I was

But because I never told him who I am.


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on Dec. 13 2011 at 4:26 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Oh i know:)

on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:45 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

Nope, good girsl never kiss and tell. 

Jk, but that would just ruin the suspence so i'm sorry Lol 


on Dec. 13 2011 at 3:02 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 278 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

UGHH!!!! Cmon!!! :):):);)

on Nov. 11 2011 at 1:38 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

Thank you so much, and hahah the whole point was to leave things in secretness; so why would I tell ? 

on Nov. 10 2011 at 8:33 pm
billgamesh11 BRONZE, Grafton, Massachusetts
3 articles 0 photos 278 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It's always darkest before the dawn." ~Florence and the Machine

Yeah, I have to say this WAS quite intriguing, you left the reader to make assumptions by themselves. But could you possibly make this an exception? I really want to know what she's hiding from her lover!!!:):):);)

on Nov. 7 2011 at 7:25 pm
queennels17 PLATINUM, Wellington, Florida
21 articles 8 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sun is out but it's still dark outside.

umm thank you so much! and what do u mean by who is she? 

on Nov. 7 2011 at 7:16 pm
Athena19 SILVER, Central Point, Oregon
5 articles 1 photo 103 comments

Favorite Quote:
'Love people. Cook them tasty food.' -Penzey's Spices

Interesting! I'm intrigued, who is she?