Confusion | Teen Ink


November 26, 2008
By QS724 SILVER, Carpentersville, Illinois
QS724 SILVER, Carpentersville, Illinois
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I watch her as she flirts with other guys and it breaks my heart. Every now and then she catches me watching and she gets this confused look on he face. I hope i conuse her as much as she confuses me. She waves me over with a smile on her face. I pull on the mask once again and walk over. The once confidante guy shrinks away.
It sucks not being able to talk to your bestfriend.

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In creative writing class

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DJAlyss GOLD said...
on Dec. 31 2018 at 2:47 pm
DJAlyss GOLD, El,paso, Texas
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Practice doesn't make perfect,
Practice makes Permanent

I keep reading this over and over again never commenting but, today I decided to. I really enjoy this I feel you express your emotions well, keep writing I enjoyed this very much.

on Jul. 28 2016 at 12:20 pm
wolfinblack GOLD, Kolkata, West Virginia
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Adults are just children with broken hearts.

this is really cool. no kidding, it is! I feel for you, dude.

on Aug. 8 2015 at 7:32 am
SomeoneMagical PLATINUM, Durham, New Hampshire
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I like this piece; it really stuck with me. I think you could turn it into a longer story or maybe just something more elaborate....anyway, nice job!

on Jan. 14 2015 at 9:14 pm
kimberlyguzmanx SILVER, Holbrook, New York
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The next chapter in your life, will always be more interesting than the last..

Sounds to me like you really got your emotions out. Good job..