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Fallen stars: Beginning

April 7, 2010
By Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
15 articles 181 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have miles to go before I sleep
If there is a will, there is a way
Nothing is impossible


With my eyes closed, I gritted my teeth. Waiting for death, the end of the pain.

" Open your eyes, maam, have this holy water". I opened my eyes to find a woman carrying a jug. She was standing with the baby whom Danny tried to kill last night. I took a closer look at them. Their eyes were hazel, like mine. But they were sparkling, giving a hint of some mystery. Tiny stars were floating around them. " Who are you?" I asked. " We are the fallen-star-angels. the lady replied. " That's a long story, now drink this quickly. It is the only way to save your life. Do you mind becoming one of us?" She asked with an anxious tone. I was too weak to reply. Time was running out. I didn't hesitate as I took the jug from her hand and drank the water. I fell asleep soon. Woke up after a week and found her sitting beside me. Her cute baby was there too. I was still weak. She helped me get up and walk with her. That was beginning of a new mythical life, with some threads of my past .


The author's comments:
This story is the sequel of " The End " as well. This is the LAST WORK without revising and rewriting.

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on Jun. 7 2010 at 9:08 pm
Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
15 articles 181 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have miles to go before I sleep
If there is a will, there is a way
Nothing is impossible

yeah, the baby is not human, but a fallen star angel

Lorelei SILVER said...
on Jun. 7 2010 at 4:43 pm
Lorelei SILVER, Newport News, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is ever easy"- Zeddicus Zul Zorander, copied by Richard Rahl

it was one of them so it didn't die (that's my guess)

on Apr. 22 2010 at 12:45 pm
Kayira1991 GOLD, Dhaka, Other
15 articles 181 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have miles to go before I sleep
If there is a will, there is a way
Nothing is impossible

How can the dead baby be alive? Can you guess? Wait for chapter 1