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While you weren't looking

April 4, 2010
By jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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In your city your mouth fills with waste and toxic fumes. You can almost taste the humans that pass you. In the streets you can hear the honking of cars sing in unison the noisy sounds of the city. Those sounds distract you, and you easily tune out the dark hooded fox that creeps into vacant houses right before your eyes. In your city the factory’s toxins mix, and creates a shield of fog that accompanies the hooded stranger throughout the swarmed streets. He only takes what his wasted, bare paws can carry. The hooded creature leaves no trace like the touch of wind. He stalks the trail he always uses, and plans his next attack, in your city.



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on May. 10 2010 at 8:48 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Haha thanks again!Your awesome! thanks for actually reading! (:

on May. 10 2010 at 8:28 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Get, Got, Gotten.

this is very nice. 5 stars...its unique and very different..now watch as I prepare to attack your city:)

on May. 8 2010 at 1:23 pm
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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haha ya its sort of a free verse style/ fictional story.. it tells you a story in a different way

Bianca said...
on May. 8 2010 at 1:16 pm
Aww it gives me the creeps, it makes you feel so violated and aware.. haha this great

on May. 1 2010 at 3:00 am
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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lets make it happen!

on May. 1 2010 at 3:00 am
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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thank you soo much.. tell your friends!

THIS IS GOOD said...
on May. 1 2010 at 2:42 am
wow, love this... its mysterious!

sydney said...
on May. 1 2010 at 2:40 am

:)!!

lets make this popular


on May. 1 2010 at 2:31 am
jessica.cherish.conner GOLD, Elk Grove, California
11 articles 0 photos 87 comments
strange and brilliant sometimes go together... thanks(:

on Apr. 30 2010 at 3:00 pm
PrimaryColors SILVER, Tacoma, Washington
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strange and brilliant