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Consumption

November 20, 2023
By KingBellamy BRONZE, Lees Summit, Missouri
KingBellamy BRONZE, Lees Summit, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
”I want you always to remember me. Will you remember that I existed, and that I stood next to you here like this.” - Haruki Murakami, Norwegian Wood


Merriam-Webster defines ichor as an ethereal fluid taking the place of blood in the veins of the ancient Greek gods, at least it did the last time I checked. But when I opened up his chest, expecting the ichor of the gods, all I saw was the insides of a pomegranate. I had never seen anyone, before or after, who laid dead as he had. I don’t know why but I had wanted to taste it. I had never had a pomegranate before. Thinking back on it today, I wish I hadn’t done what I did. There seems to be a pattern in my life, of me being unable to love someone without consuming them entirely. It’s hard to love someone without softness in one hand, and a weapon in the other. Perhaps, if my mother had fed me better I could’ve truly loved him, my Orpheus. In all honesty, I believe he damned me entirely when he started paying me attention. I don’t know if I will ever regret it, though.


The author's comments:

I really appreciate any feedback you could give me. The reason I wrote this piece is because I've always been interested in religion, and I wanted to combine it with personal issues I've had in life. I really enjoyed writing this piece. Thank you so much.


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