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In My Mind

July 2, 2013
By theporcelaingirl BRONZE, Austin, Texas
theporcelaingirl BRONZE, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't point the blame when you can't find nothing, look to yourself and you might find something..." Sleeping With Sirens


My name is Sailor. I am sixteen years old. And I have a secret. Only, I don't even know my own secret--yet. I keep hearing things...things in my mind. I can't help but feel that they aren't my thoughts or feelings. I can only think of one explanation, but I don't want to say it aloud. Can you guess my secret? Chapter 1: Mindgames I feel a cool breeze. It blows my blonde hair back behind me. The grass between my toes tickles as I continue to walk through the park. I stop suddenly as I hear something..."Those pesky dogs, digging up my garden..." The voice is not mine, and it is echoing in my mind. I look over to my right to see an old lady in her lawn shaking her head at some crushed flowers. I frown to myself as I begin to walk again. As I walk through the park, I continue to hear weird voices inside my head. "Gotta find some nuts! Gotta find some nuts!" I hear in a high-pitched squeak. I jerk my head to my left to see a squirrel running around a tree, occasionally stopping to dig. My head starts to spin as millions of voices crowd into my brain at once. I can't see as I fall to the ground. I hear a person yelling as I pass out. I only remember a soothing hand stroking my cheeks.


I open my eyes to see a fire blazing. I start to panic as I realize it is only a fireplace. I sit up and look at my surroundings. I am in a house. A house I don't recognize. I rub my eyes and I get up. I am about to walk around when my legs give way and I stumble. I fall but someone catches me. A boy. About my age, black hair, brown eyes. He smiles at me and helps me sit back down on the couch. "You okay? You took quite a fall earlier." he says sitting down next to me. "Yeah...who are you?" I ask, confused. "John," he says handing me a cup of tee. I take into my cold hands and take a sip. So far so good, no voices. But as soon as I think that, I hear something: "She's so pretty..." That sounds like John... I can't tell if he said it out-loud or not. His lips didn't move...maybe I'm seeing things. "Thanks." He looks at me, confused. "What?" "Thanks for calling me pretty." I smile weakly. "H-how did you do that?" he asks, backing away from me. "I don't know what you're talking about!" I exclaim. "You read my mind! Are you some kind of witch?" he smiles awkwardly, but I can tell he's scared. "No...I don't know how I did it..." He shakes his head. "Never-mind. So what's your name?" he asks me. "Sailor. Sailor Tucker." I say smiling for real this time. He smiles a beautiful smile. I look into his brown eyes. I blush as he looks into mine. He seems to notice, and looks down into his own cup of tea. I take a sip of mine and look into the fire. "I better get going...my mom will be worried about me!" I say standing up. I wobble a little, but I manage to walk to the front door. John follows me and opens the front door. "Can I walk you home?" he asks shyly. "I hope she likes me..." I hear in an echo. I smile and blush. "Sure." We arrive at my house soon enough, and I introduce him to my mom. "Ooh! Sailor! You didn't tell me you had a boyfriend!" my mother says happily. My face turns bright red and John smiles at me. "Mooooom! He's not my boyfriend!" I say awkwardly. She looks sorry but she gives me that "look" that mothers give when they know something. "I'm so sorry, John!" I say smiling at him, my face still red. He winks at me when my mom looks away. "That's okay, I don't mind." There I go again, all the blushing. "I wonder if they'll go to prom together!" I hear my mother's voice in my head. I chuckle to myself and say good-bye to John. But not before my mom invites him for dinner. Gosh! She must think I like him! Well...I guess I do... Soon dinner is over and I say good-bye to John. When he leaves, I find myself wishing the night would end so I could see him again. I think I finally found my Prince Charming. Chapter Notes: I hope you like the book so far as much as I do!!!! I hope you enjoy and PLEASE give me input if you want more!!!


The author's comments:
I have been interested in mind-readers and supernatural things for a while. I thought this would make an interesting book!

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on Jul. 20 2013 at 9:22 am
MorningStar921 PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"They made their own choice. They chose family. And, well... isn't that kinda the whole point? No doubt - endings are hard. But then again... nothing ever really ends, does it?"
--Chuck, 'Supernatural' Episode 522

:D And be sure to let me know when it gets published!

on Jul. 17 2013 at 10:13 pm
theporcelaingirl BRONZE, Austin, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't point the blame when you can't find nothing, look to yourself and you might find something..." Sleeping With Sirens

Thanks again!!!! I will I have like 2,600 words so it should get under novels with the first chapter haha so yeah I am about to post it under thriller and novel hopefully it works!!! Thank you so much!!!! Oh and your welcome!!!

on Jul. 15 2013 at 9:45 am
MorningStar921 PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"They made their own choice. They chose family. And, well... isn't that kinda the whole point? No doubt - endings are hard. But then again... nothing ever really ends, does it?"
--Chuck, 'Supernatural' Episode 522

This is just my personal opinion, but I think you should publish your novel under thriller instead of romance because it has that supernatural feel to it. You could make it a paranormal romance novel without going too far into the plain and simple romance genre.

on Jul. 15 2013 at 9:40 am
MorningStar921 PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
"They made their own choice. They chose family. And, well... isn't that kinda the whole point? No doubt - endings are hard. But then again... nothing ever really ends, does it?"
--Chuck, 'Supernatural' Episode 522

BTW thanks for checking out my story! I appreciate your feedback. Nobody ever leaves a comment! Anyway, back to your story: is it republished as a novel yet? If it is, I read that you can add another chapter in the My Work tab. Idk how well that works out; I don't have a novel yet, so... If you have another questions, just leave a comment on my story either notifying me to read one you wrote on this piece (or the novel) or just ask via my work.

on Jul. 14 2013 at 3:24 pm
theporcelaingirl BRONZE, Austin, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't point the blame when you can't find nothing, look to yourself and you might find something..." Sleeping With Sirens

Hey!!! Yes I am actually trying to post it as a novel. This is embarressing but I have been actually trying to post another chapter for days! I already wrote the chapter on my computer but I can't figure out how to add another chapter! When I first posted it, I thought it was under novels haha. It was actually categorized as romance but I guess they changed it to thriller! If you could help that would be amazing!!! And I will TOTALLY check out your stuff!!!!!!! :D

on Jul. 13 2013 at 7:21 pm
MorningStar921 PLATINUM, Cheshire, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
"They made their own choice. They chose family. And, well... isn't that kinda the whole point? No doubt - endings are hard. But then again... nothing ever really ends, does it?"
--Chuck, 'Supernatural' Episode 522

I really liked this story! You should make it a novel and publish it as a book here on TeenInk or in real life. I would definitely read it if you did. Also, do you think you could read some of my pieces and comment on them?

on Jul. 13 2013 at 1:25 am
theporcelaingirl BRONZE, Austin, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't point the blame when you can't find nothing, look to yourself and you might find something..." Sleeping With Sirens

Thanks guys sooooo much for voting this as number one in thriller!!! It means so much!!!