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The Broken

February 20, 2014
By bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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you say you love the rain but then you use and umbrella <br /> you say you love the dog but then you back away<br /> you say you love the sun but you hide in the shade<br /> this is why im afraid to have you love me


I woke up to a shrill sound. The sound is ringing loud in my ears. I was sweating so much my sheets were damp. I got up and threw my covers off my bed. As I stood up I realized the shrill sound was the fire alarm. I screamed for my mother and father louder and louder, I got no response. I could only hope they were outside. I quickly ran to the door and felt the handle. The handle was burning hot. I had no other way out. I had to think of a way to get out of my house any way possible. I flung a sheet from my bed out the window as fast as I could and started screaming, I need to get someone’s attention. The sounds of sirens came flooding to my ear I had a small sigh of relief.

“What?” I said

“What?” I repeated. I couldn’t believe anything I had heard. I was broken, broken into a million pieces that couldn’t be put back together. It was devastating. I didn’t know where I would go or when I would be better all I knew was that my mother and father were dead. Dead and I didn’t even get to say goodbye. No I love you, no hugs, no kisses just nothing they are gone now and I didn’t get to say anything.

Years later I’m now 17 and I have a new family. But even though I have a new family I haven’t forgotten my family. I loved them and they were killed by a fire. Whoever created the fire I hope that you didn’t mean to. If you meant to shame on you broke a family and killed their souls. I’m better now but I still have to live with out my parents.



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on Feb. 25 2014 at 6:47 am
bayside51 BRONZE, Cumberland, Rhode Island
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you say you love the rain but then you use and umbrella <br /> you say you love the dog but then you back away<br /> you say you love the sun but you hide in the shade<br /> this is why im afraid to have you love me

Thank You! I enjoy feedback!

on Feb. 24 2014 at 6:08 pm
ElizabethAnneHall BRONZE, Moultrie, Georgia
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Extraordinary things are always hiding in places people never think to look .

This was touching , good job!