I enjoyed how you summarized the story in a few sentences whilst making it interesting at the same time. The plot of the story isn’t revealed too much, giving the reader curiosity as to what may happen as they come closer to the end of the book. Your choice of vocabulary also fits in really well with the review. In addition, you address the readers and tell them what the story will most likely teach them (the true consequences of lying). 

     I can tell your stance for this book is positive and that you encourage other readers to read this book. You also included in your review what the readers may feel when they read The Man in the Rockefeller Suit, which can help them have a sense of what this story is about. Moreover, the story plot seems a bit crazy but you reassured the reader that they will be entertained with the book no matter what. In conclusion, your review was extremely persuasive and lures a lot of readers into reading this intriguing book.