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melting

October 4, 2013
By aimee lopez BRONZE, Phoeniex, Arizona
aimee lopez BRONZE, Phoeniex, Arizona
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I like lauren milted's,poem "melting". I like the way she expresses herself by writing in the poem. In the poem it explains how she fell in love of a sailor. I like the way she laid out the poem; it was an intesting choice. thankyou Lauren for writing this poem its so sencer.



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