I noticed in this story she talked about making the city her future home. i see what she saw, the city is very beautiful. Her writing was good also, it was very well put together ."NYC doesnt just glitter, it glows."This is what she says when she visits the Empire state building. She uses a couple good metaphors including "lighting up the radio tower like a steel match." I loved the creativity used on that one specifically. she mentions how bright the city lights are at night letting not only America , but the galaxy that New York is alive. The story teller talks about all different cultures coming together in the big city that she notices.