I get what you are trying to say here, but as a devout feminist myself, I have to say I find some aspects of this poem to be a little problematic. Instead of promoting equality in the social perception of the way women belonging to two different cultures tend to dress, you seem very critical of the "revealing" way some western women dress. The truth is, a woman can choose to express herself however she wants, and it doesn't mean she is any less worthy of respect. Also, the whole thing about older men harassing young American girls seemed like victim-blaming to me. When somebody is sexually harassed or assaulted, it is never their fault! Blaming young girls, or anyone, for their own assault is incredibly problematic because it is on some levels excusing the actions of their attacker and perpetuating rape culture, and also, it's just insensitive to the victims. I want to live in a world where women have the freedom to dress however they feel comfortable- whether that may be in a bikini or a burqa- and not face any racism or misogyny as a result.

Thanks! I was going for ironic, too. I find the whole topic of feminism and self-expression very interesting.

Interesting and true!