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The Adventure of Frank

October 15, 2015
By JOrgeAlvaRezJr BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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JOrgeAlvaRezJr BRONZE, Tampa, Florida
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Author's note:

I imagined something crazy so i decided to use this story and make it mysterious, thrilling and adventourus

 Frank was a very small waffle man that lived in a beautiful treehouse. His family

struggled to get food and water and they were all complaining of who will get the food. Frank

stopped the arguing and said he would go then everyone was silent. He left as the door shut

behind him in the treehouse.

 On his adventure Frank finally walked up to the front door of a house and started to

search for a way in. He eventually found a hole leading to the inside of the house. The opening

was behind a bush it had a stick in front of it so Frank moved the stick out of the way. Frank took

his last breath before going in and gained the courage to do so. He walked very slowly and

cautiously as he came out of the hole in the house.

 Frank waited at the hole until the time was right. He sprinted toward the couch and went

under it. Relieved that he was safe, he turned back and a monster with long legs came through

the door and put a bag in front of the hole. Frank saw food in the bag, but the monster took it out

and it went behind a wall, so he couldn't see where the food had gone. Frank started to cry

because that would have been the only way to get food and get out of the house but he knew the

mission wouldn't be easy. He wiped his tears and continued on his mission. He was still in the

living room but was lost and didn't know where to go. He looked very closely and found a hole,

but he didn't know where it led to, but he was willing to do anything to find food.

 It was too late. The monster with long legs came back and had a machine that sucked up

particles from the floor and Frank knew he couldn't get away. The machine was coming right at

him with a loud noise, and he couldn't do anything but be sucked up. He cried out for someone to

save him, and at that moment his savior arrived, a much smaller creature with furry legs came in

front of the machine and stopped it. Frank knew it was his time to run, so he ran to that

mysterious hole.

 As he got there he never thought he would make it. The hole was very dark and Frank

didn't know what to expect in there other than food, but he knew it would lead to food. He

walked in with confidence and heard a growl in the distance.

 "What are you doing here this is my home." said a suspicious voice.

 Frank walked behind slowly with fear, and didn't know what to do and didn't know who

was talking to him "I'm just here looking for food, I mean no harm."

 The rat popped up in front of Frank and looked at him "Maybe you will be my food."

 Before Frank could say anything he was being eaten and thought his life would come to

an end. Luckily he wasn't chopped into pieces, only bites, but he was hurting. Falling down to his

doom he landed in the stomach of the rat. Hesitating to get up, he hurt his back and yelled in

pain. Looking around with a mournful look on his face. He saw his daughter and wife lying on

the floor of the stomach, ripped waffle piece from waffle piece. Forcing himself to get up Frank

ran over to them with tears running down his face.

 In the rats stomach all he could think about was his wife and daughter and if he would

live through this. Even though he thought it was over he still tried to find a way out. Frank

started scratching the rats intestines, but nothing would work.

 Days went by that Frank was in the rat and lived off of eating his wife and daughter. He

hated to do it but it was the only way to survive. He kept thinking about them. Why were they

here in the first place? What were they doing here? Who kidnapped them? Frank decided to leave

those thoughts for now and figure out a way to get out.

 One evening Frank heard a hissing sound and he knew it was the savior. "Please help me

I'm trapped in the rats belly,"

 "Don't worry young man I'll get you out" said the savior

 All Frank could hear were hisses, growls and the hits from the savior. Frank was being

thrown around like a ball. Everything stopped, no thuds or hissing. Frank looked behind him and

saw the savior cut upon the rats belly.

 "You can come out now your safe,"

 "Thank you so much for saving me" said Frank

 Frank turned to look at the savior and he had disappeared. He was shocked because he

had just seen the savior when he walked out.

 Frank saw the sun setting and an apple tree next to him. He grabbed an apple and started

to eat it. He ate two that night and was extremely full afterward. Frank missed his family and

wanted to see them again. The savior gave him that opportunity as Frank had a heart attack at

that moment.

 Frank woke up hours later in a place where it was all white but the sun was still there. He

looked closely and saw the savior in front of the sunset with his wife and daughter.



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