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A Girl In a Galaxy

February 28, 2020
By Anonymous

It was a cold day in a galaxy far away a little girl only 14 yrs old roamed the galaxy looking for answers.  her mother had disappeared due to a time paradox a few years back when the girl was only 12. The little girl's     name is Laura. She didn't know her last name. Her mother never told her. Along the galaxy there were threats . like certain people bounty hunters looking for her. She didn't know  her value as she was high on the market. Her mother was so close to selling her but did not because she was so cute and needed care from her mother. But she was wanted for no reason. Laura thought it was something about her last name that she doesn't know. Maybe she was related to someone bad like a bad person. Now she was in  danger one of the many bounty hunters found her. He spoke aloud ¨I need you alive. He will pay me nicely¨ laura ran but she couldn't escape as his ship was too fast. She was captured Laura said ¨let me be free or I will scream¨ then the bounty hunter said I dont care Im the best bounty in the galaxy I will bring you to my master and he will pay me handsomely¨. Laura was shocked she couldn't save herself  finally they were at the layer of the master of the bounty hunter. They went inside to find his master sitting on his throne. The master said ¨good Tyrone here is your money ¨ . The master threw 500 dollars to the bounty hunter Tyrone said ¨thanks master but I am not done¨. Tyrone clicked a button on his belt and the throne fell into a trap. ¨ Tyrone you little!¨ the master fell into the hole before he could finish his sentence. ¨Well you can go now ¨ Tyrone said  ¨ok¨ laura said. She had taken the ship away to another planet but what Tyrone didn't know is laura had stolen all of his 500 dollars. ¨Finally some money¨ laura said as she crept the money into her pocket. 4 days later she had bought a tiny ball that held no value at all but she felt it had some value suddenly she heard something a ship was attacking! Laura needed to flee. She stole a nearby bike and flew the ship following her. She saw Tyrone on the ship. He was yelling commands like he was a madman. But she saw another ship that was attacking that big ship surprisingly the smaller ships had won the battle! Laura had met the men there names were skywalker and walker they had won many battles by themselves. They had given her a lightsaber a saber that was invented a long time ago skywalker told her ¨well take it with good use and don't forget  there are certain people that will fight you I suggest you get trained before you use this do you want me to train you ¨? And Laura said ¨sure¨. The training had started time had passed 4yrs to be exact they had fought many enemies and faced great danger but laura a now 18yr old girl was now a jedi master she still held that ball with almost no value at all one day she was tinkering with it when it opened it was a puzzle she easily solved it with her knowledge of a jedi master it gave her a crystal for her lightsaber. She injected it into the saber and it turned rainbow. She sliced a pillow in her small room. It sliced in half but the whole room had sliced in half. She had just then felt a great pain then she was in the back of her mind she heard a voice that she didn't hear before ¨who are you¨? Laura screamed ¨I am your evil side where all bad thoughts are born¨. Laura was quite surprised by this thing but it weirdly looked like a darker side of her but she didn't react like she was mad she was just confused  ¨how did you form¨? Laura said ¨just when your mother died¨. She was surprised again then she was brought back to the real world she started crying as she remembered her mother. This thing wasn't a bit evil it was just a clump of bad memories the heart of it being her mother's death. Then the spaceship was being attacked! But it wasn't another spaceship, it was something green like a spirit. It called itself the spirit of purity ¨I will get rid of Laura's bad side and pure it¨. ¨no¨! Laura said as she grabbed her rainbow lightsaber ¨very well I will just have to eradicate you all together the galaxy can not be impure¨. They had begun the battle over laura´s freedom the spirit was very powerful and started with an attack called the rain of purity it rained purity seeds that grew other versions of itself and Laura had to decide which version was correct or she would be killed senselessly fortunately she picked the right one as all the other had a darker shade of green. Then the spirit of purity spawned a purity probe to attack Laura. She killed it and did damage to the spirit 50000 to be exactly 1 third of its health. It had 150000 it was now at 100000 health. ¨I will not die now¨ the spirit of purity said ¨neither will I¨ Laura said ¨we will see that¨ the spirit of purity said next Laura had to stay inside a big green circle that transitioned every few seconds. She had dodged every attack so far with her knowledge from skywalker. The spirit of purity sent another purity probe Laura killed it and did 50000 It was the last phase of the fight or was it? The spirit of purity did one final attack testing Laura´s knowledge there were three doors 2 were wrong and 1 was correct she guessed right! The spirit of purity sent 1 finale probe Laura killed it and had vanquished the spirit of purity ¨ugh you are so powerful but heed my words power is great but it has consequences you will die one day that day if far away in another galaxy skywalker is not always right but he does have a big mind you have cursed yourself¨. The spirit of purity said ¨you are very dumb to challenge me you can't just take the impure right out of me you haven't seen what I have been through¨.  The spirit just disappeared out of clear sight ¨Laura¨! Skywalker shouted then Laura felt a splitting headache then she was in the other world ¨well you killed him didn't you¨? Laura could not respond. She was thinking how did the other side of her know? Then she was brought back to the real world. There was another threat, a diamond that shined bright like the moon. It did not attack. I am here for Laura the diamond said¨ I will not attack. I have news. I know your last name is vanisher. Laura vanisher “the vanishers were an intergalactic family wanted for crime and power as they worked for bounty hunters and asked for loans and did not return any money the bounty’s like tyrone thought that laura and her mother were the same. “Well that was crazy” laura said “yeah” said laura soon was not very active and was quick to anger but she always felt different around skywalker she became more distant around him they had fought many threats one day she was pulled back into the other side of her’s dimension “I noticed changes in your behavior are you alright?”.skywalker said. “Yes” Laura said pulling out her saber she was going to kill the other side of her “what are you doing?” the other side said .Laura bolted to the other side of killing her. “Why?” Laura did not respond “ahhhhhhh” the other side said as she vanished into dust. Later Laura decided to go dark. Going dark is inflicting yourself with hate and witchcraft. She gave into her dark side. It was the spirit. His essence was inside her. Then she absconded. Left skywalker. To find the item of truth. Skywalker tried to stop her the duel began. Skywaker opened with a charge attack on the planet zephyr. Laura was too far away to stop now. Skywalker did not succeed with his attack. Laura Slapped skywalker and his lightsaber fell into her hand. With one attack to the heart he was dead. She flew towards the green sun and it exploded. Laura Vanisher was dead. A singularity happened and the events occurred all over again.The dark essence was in every retelling.this was the 484,984,009th time the timeline has repeated.but it would end the 484,984,010th time. All the other events occurred but at the end she went dark then the scratch happened. The scratch resets all dark with new. Laura was eradicated. The battle field is empty. Skywalker never dies. So the universe reset itself and it failed, the sky or heaven was up front for destruction. The scratch was targeted for the first time all these events happened. We go back to the first time it happened.Laura was about to go dark and kill skywalker and it failed as the scratch happened. Dark Laura turned light again and 484,948,009 resets were erased. The spirit in its downfall almost killed the green sun. but the cosmic cat stopped it.the spirit was a mishap or a flaw in time.

Lauren Vanisher

Lauren vanisher had a hard life growing up. She was constantly burraded for her lightsaber training by her father. Her mother was out of the picture at the time. Her adventure would be the  inspiration of Laura's adventure. One day lauren, about 10 years old, saw the planet in danger and jumped to stop it. But her father made a noble sacrifice and launched her out of the stargate along with 50 other kids for the planet. Then ten minutes later the metour hit the planet. Lauren had landed on lofaf and began the rest of her life. Tyrone and lauren landed on lofaf together. The other 48 kids were forsaken and sacrificed to the green sun. Lauren had to live a life with a young typhoon soon to be a bounty hunter. On day 14 tyrone and lauren meet and begin to have a bit of banter. “What are you doing here!” Tyrone said. “Grieving over Zephyr’s Destruction” Lauren remarked.”Well We should work together to survive.” Lauren had her rainbow lightsaber familiar with other people we’ve met.”I am not going to work with the likes of you!” Tyrone said. And the two depart. Knowing the fight  would be in many years, Lauren and Tyrone had much time to prepare. We will focus on Lauren’s adventure for now. Lauren started by studying her surroundings for a little while. The plane had many tall/small mountains and many hostile caco beasts along with horned beasts. There is a leveling up system. This system is called the adventure board. It contains 10 levels with different skills and abilities. The default level at birth male and female was 2. Lauren is already 3 stages up the adventure. Level 5. Tyrone however is put at a disadvantage however as he is only 2 levels up the ladder. Where were we? Oh Right! Lauren began a wonderful adventure the likes of no other. First lauren had to find or make a stable structure THEN Lauren had made an encounter with a horned beast! She pulled out her lightsaber and began the fight with the thing. The beast began a charge attack. She learned how to counter this. she stepped to the side and sliced the big horn near it’s mane. The beast began a slash attack and lauren had to counter. Slice. The hand went clean off and lauren began her attack. A straight attack towards the heart. The beast fell and lauren had won the fight.Lauren began looking for loose wood. Her lightsaber was special as it allowed many different modes. Axe mode,Sword mode and shield mode. She switched to axe mode, and began chopping trees. She successfully chopped down 15 trees. By the time she was done it had reached low noon. Lauren could combine abilities with recent switched abilities.She combined Axe and sword to create building wand! A Screen appeared from lauren’s eye projector showing the options she could build with the acquired wood 25 wood trees for a nice little shack, or 15 for a wooden-tent. She chose wooden-tent. The build finished in about 20 minutes. She cut half a tree down for a campfire. She combined builder wand with lightsaber default to create FLAMMABLE MATERIAL. She lit the tree on fire and Lauren began to daze. Lauren woke up early in the morning. She got up and she was hungry. Well not really. You see Lauren and Laura are 2 gen humans. This species does not have to eat as it has learned the art of metamorphosis and consumes air through the skin. Water is gathered the same way. Back to our story. Lauren began wandering around the forest and noticed a small cabin. She really wanted to know the mysteries of this cabin But she is a busy gal. Then all of a sudden, A Caco-Beast jumped out of nowhere! It was not hostile. It was not common to get a neutral Caco-Beast on lofaf. It needed attention and a friend to keep it company so lauren has a pet caco-beast. Lauren Cobines Light-Shield and Builder-wand to create light saddle! Lauren mounts this saddle to the caco beasts upper body. RIDE LAUREN RIDE! She is almost flying on the back of this thing. She hits it gently to stop and it works. She stops at THE FIRST MOUNTAIN.There was 1 mountain on lofaf it has a denizen. Lauren knew she was not ready to fight the imposing denizen. Then out of nowhere 3 horned-beasts pounced towards Laurens direction! They were very threatening and hungry! One charged at Lauren and her pet. Lauren quickly combined Light saber and Light-Sword to make a SHARP LANCE! Now Lauren charges the beast with all your might! The attack was successful! The beast was cut in half! Two of the horned beasts came running at Lauren and her pet without hesitation. The lance changed in the shield and saber and Lauren blocked one charge, and counteracted the other slashing one of the beasts upper body. The caco-beast attacked the other horned beast giving it a scar. Feeling pain the last horned beast ran away. Lauren Levels up once! Making her level 6 Now! Lauren rides up the denizen mountain like a pro!  She falls down the hole at the top. Wondering what will come next. To avoid inevitable death her caco-pet shot out of his mouth a physical cancelling bolt to deal with the fall. She swiftly landed on the bean bag like substance from her pet. She got up and walked with her pet at her side. She had encountered floating caco-demons! She made haste and dodged a fireball from one caco-demon. Then her caco-pet slashed the one eyed- beast and Lauren counter attacked slicing the meatball in half. The other Caco-Demon got her pet pretty good. Lauren jumped and sliced the light-saber into its eye. It fell to the ground and Lauren comforted her pet. She combined Builder-Wand and flammable material to create a BASIC MEDKIT! She aids her pet. They will need to rest soon. Lauren Threw down some flammable material and slashed it with her light-saber. Lauren laid down next to her Caco-Pet. She dazed off, And was ready for the next day. Laura woke up during the morning. Her caco-pet had already woken up and killed a glorphian a small type of gen 1 rat. Lauren got up and lit the FLAMMABLE MATERIAL on fire. Starting a small little checkpoint. Lauren and her pet descended into the denizens stairs. She slowly walked up the stairway. Her pet absurved her emotions and it got tense. The cave opened to a circle with nine points. Lauren mounted her pet. Lightning struck and a beast appeared. typhorphis the Cacomaster appeared and it was up to lauren to stop him. “Well Adventurer you have chosen to challenge me!”. “Yes,” Lauren said. “Well It shall begin!” The Caco-Master Summoned 4 Caco-Demons and 2 caco-beasts. Lauren was quickly outnumbered by the vastly skilled Caco-Master. Lauren rode her pet and charged with her lance and succeeded in killing a caco-demon and a caco-beast in her charge attack. One of the caco-demons shot a fireball out of its mouth. Lauren and her pet dodged the fireball then immediately a caco-beast jumped in for a slash attack. Lauren sliced the beasts arm off and decapitated it. only one more caco-demon to go. Lauren levels up once! She is now level 7! Lauren charged the cacodemon and it floated to the right. Lauren slashed it, leaving a huge scar. Then the cacodemon counter-attacked with a bite to her caco-pets left leg. She falls to the ground and aids her pet. There's not enough time to fully aid her pet. She Jumps and cuts the cacodemon in half and goes for a direct attack to the caco-master. She hits the heart and the caco-master falls to the ground. defeated. She throws her lightsaber and goes to aid her pet. It’s too late though as the caco-pet has its last breath and passes on to the after-life. “Goodbye my friend”. Lauren said. And digs her pet a grave and buries it. We will continue her adventure later.

Tyrone Wilson 


Tyrone was a different story than Lauren. This “adventure” was themed around Manhattan or Highline in this story. After the intense landing on lofaf, Tyrone did not want to stay. He had trouble growing up. Even though he is 13, he was troubled by bullies and parents. And does not regret zephyrs destruction. Tyrone wanders around zephyr cluelessly when he finds the direction cannon. The panel next to the cannon was a location device. Tyrone examines this device and pulls his gun out of it’s holster. Since he has a gun he levels up more difficult meaning he has to kill more enemies than most people. Lauren right now is level 5 at this point. He is level 4. Anyway Tyrone enters “Highline” into the command line. Coordinates appear on the screen and the ship powers up. It points in the direction and waits. Tyrone enters the ship and presses a few buttons. All the children on zephyr were taught how to fly with aircrafts and how to drive with cars. It is big in the education system in general and is a planet law that any kid  10 and over is eligible to learn and potentially get a license. Tyrone blasts off. The wait to get to the location is about 10 minutes. Tyrone lands on a highline in a holding bay. Abandoned. He walks out of it and is greeted by young thugs working on a project. This will come up later in tyrone's adventure. The young thugs jump tyrone and he is prepared to shoot. He shot from the hip foreshadowing later events. He shot one of the thugs in the liver, and he fell to the ground. Dead. The two other thugs Approach and they interact.”Why Did you kill Maurice?” “Yeah man he just wanted to propose a business deal” the two thugs said. “Oh Very sorry” Tyrone Said. “ Well he was just one of our gang” “ We are members of The Cold Cherry Gang” the two thugs said. “Ok well I came from lofaf after zephyrs destruction and wondering if I can be part of the gangs of highline”. Tyrone Said. “Well Come with us” “We will see about this proposal”. The two thugs led the tyro on the streets to their boss. “Well Rickie and Simon you return”. The boss says. “Where is Moarice”. “ Well this little runt shot him and now he is dead”. The Boss gives Tyrone a weird look. He observes that the boss is liking him and his random enforced nature. “ How about you become a member of the Cold Cherry?” “Man threw me a coat and sent me to the street man,” Tyrone says.  “Well, Well Well Lookie here a little runt wants to be apart of our group”. “Yes It would please me if I was part of your gang”. “Well first tell me where you are from”. “ I am originally From Zephyr but it was destroyed about 15 days ago. I landed on zephyr with a little girl and witnessed 48 kids sacrificed to the green sun”. “Wow what a story for a 13 year old” “I must say you are an official member of the Cold Cherry gang”. “My first order is to set yourself up with leggings from old bounty hunter lodges”. Tyrone Makes his way to the abandoned lodges and he arrives. He walks in the dilapidated building and finds the suiting lounge. He opens the door and finds 2 hoodlums in the suits threatening him. Tyrone Pulls his gun out from its holster and shoots one of the hoodlums while the other counterattacks. A pipe swings to tyrone's leg, breaks it and he falls to the ground. Tyrone Shoots the hoodlum who attacked killing the hoodlum. The other hoodlum was hit to the bullet resistant chest not killing him. Tyrone Shoots the helmet and so ends the hoodlums lives. Tyrone absurves in the suit holding bay that the hoodlums took the last suits.We'll make do with what you have. TYRONE before the epic flying sequence tyrone exits the building. FLY TYRONE FLY! He flies around highline like a pro! And so Begins Tyrone’s descent to villainy. Sort Of. He Flies to the base and gets his first mission. Lauren Vanisher. She had threatened The Boss on Zephyr. Fortunately, Only 47 Were forsaken. In the 15 days The boss owned mercenaries and bounty hunters. Tyrone Accepted the option for 1000 space dollars. The boss gave tyrone levels to equal lauren’s current level. The boss had a starship for him to take. BLAST OFF! In a few minutes, Tyrone had reached Lofaf. He Flew to the denizen mountain and saw lauren. She was digging a grave and he landed. Lauren heard him. Tyrone hastily took his helmet off and they talked for a while. “End of the line Lauren!” “Well If it isn’t tyrone wilson coming to fight the big bad lauren” Lauren said. “I have a bounty hunter job to complete.” Tyrone pulls out wanted papers from the highline. “Why am I Wanted there?” Lauren asked. “The Boss wants your head on his wall so I naturally hating you decided I would give him that item”. “What you kill me? I just killed the caco-master! My pet died a few minutes ago and I would like some privacy” Lauren said. “ I don’t care about your pet or the caco-master I just want to kill you and get some money.” “Then so be it”. And the fight began. Tyrone launched a missile towards lauren. She quickly dodged the attack. Tyrone shot some bullets at her but she deflected those and went for a direct attack. Tyrone knocked her back and swiftly shooted multi-missiles at her. The missiles followed her as she ran across the mountain. Finally they exploded and lauren slashed Tyrone's armor. Tyrone blasted lauren’s forearm off but was hit with the same fate on his left forearm. Both lost a forearm, They retreat. Tyrone will have to admit to his boss that Lauren was too powerful and Lauren would have to aid her wounds. We will continue tyrone’s story later.

Lauren and Tyrone’s Befriending

After Lauren and Tyrone’s skirmish, They both lost a forearm. Right forearm for Lauren and Left for Tyrone. Anyway, Lauren Looks over at the Caco-masters corpse and knows what she has to do. She rips the right forearm off the beast. Lauren Combined Left Forearm and builder wand to create Builder Forearm! Then and their Lauren gets an idea. Lauren combines builder wand and caco-master corpse and creates builder suit! Lauren wears this suit till the end! Lauren levels up once! She is now level 9! Back to Tyrone he returns to the highline. He finds the Cold Cherry base and confronts his boss. “Well did you kill her?” “No. She is too strong. I tried and lost my left forearm in the process”. Tyrone said. The boss threw tyrone a fancy robot forearm. Tyrone painfully, attached the forearm to the rest of his arm. “It’s fine. Everybody fails their first mission.” “But not everybody makes it in the business”. The boss said, “Fail your next mission and your off the team. With a fine on your head and a ten second head start.” “Won’t happen again sir.” Tyrone said. He was worried. In a moment of thought and precision tyrone killed his boss. Level 9. He wandered off and planted his gun on the sight and took the bosses extra shotgun. He was off to find Lauren and befriend her. But before he went to find the High-Queen. Knowing she has absolute power. She actually threatens the universe. She wants to blow up the green sun. Tyrone figures with Lauren and him (and maybe somebody else on the way) They would beat the High-Queen. Tyrone gets on the starship and blasts off to lofaf. Lauren is currently wondering about a strange signal far into the galaxy, and knows it has to do. Lauren will need allies to face this threat. She thinks for a bit and decides she should befriend tyrone. But this will not be enough to face him. Then there's jack noir. The high queens assistant. Lauren begins her search to find tyrone. She knows he’s on highline somewhere. Then all of a sudden, a ship headed towards lofaf landed on the denizen mountain. Tyrone got out of the ship. “I have not come to kill you. Instead I have come to befriend you and defeat the high-queen.” “I was thinking the same thing. I am 100 percent in one the plan to kill the high-queen.” Lauren said. “As long as we get to investigate this weird signal.” Lauren said. “Alright. I guess we’re a team now”. We will continue this adventure later.



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