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Year one

December 10, 2015
By baythebae GOLD, Lincoln, Nebraska
baythebae GOLD, Lincoln, Nebraska
11 articles 5 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I came, I saw, I conquered." -Julius Caesar


Summary:

Authors note:
Dear reader,
This is my story that I made, and a lot in the beginning and the ending was changed. I am worried about the description, because I don't think I had enough of a description of the characters so it makes it hard to imagine things. I like the beginning though, because I feel that I have enough description there. Please help me to know if you like it, or if there are things I need to change. Know that I take everything into consideration!!
Sincerely,
Baythebae 


baythebae

Year one


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on Feb. 2 at 2:35 am
Arline_R BRONZE, Woodland, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
"If it still makes you cry<br /> It still matters"<br /> <br /> &<br /> <br /> "I feel happy<br /> when you look at me<br /> because I know<br /> for one split second<br /> <br /> I was on your mind."<br /> <br /> &<br /> <br /> "You're that 'nothing'<br /> when people ask me<br /> what i'm thinking about."

it reminds me of twilight

on Feb. 2 at 2:30 am
Arline_R BRONZE, Woodland, Washington
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it still makes you cry<br /> It still matters"<br /> <br /> &<br /> <br /> "I feel happy<br /> when you look at me<br /> because I know<br /> for one split second<br /> <br /> I was on your mind."<br /> <br /> &<br /> <br /> "You're that 'nothing'<br /> when people ask me<br /> what i'm thinking about."

I need the rest of it now. I love it