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December 26, 2009
By jeanines GOLD, Stony Point, New York
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"the only thing to fear, is fear itself."- theodore roosevelt

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i cant help but feel that god isnt real
for you cant give and take one childs sanity and think that it will go unnoticed
you take away me and think i would still, dream upon your make believe and chersih your existance
you cant make my life hell
and think i wouldnt scream or cry
no being who loves all would make me crawl on my bare hands and feet
to kiss holyness
to think that you are real is just in the past

© Kaelyn L., East Northport, NY

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this is the way i feel about god after everything that im going through
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jeanines GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:48 am
jeanines GOLD, Stony Point, New York
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&quot;the only thing to fear, is fear itself.&quot;- theodore roosevelt

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ill think about lol
ljd33 SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:48 am
ljd33 SILVER, X, North Carolina
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That's cool, i would never have thought of that but now i could see it. I could imagine the guy making a choice. Maybe you could write about what the guy is feeling about this part with god?!?! That might be a good piece!
jeanines GOLD said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:44 am
jeanines GOLD, Stony Point, New York
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&quot;the only thing to fear, is fear itself.&quot;- theodore roosevelt

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well the guy is peering into the world and u can c the clouds so 2 me its almost as if he is thinking, thinking about god
ljd33 SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2010 at 7:41 am
ljd33 SILVER, X, North Carolina
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WOW, this is really good. I can't believe how strong this writing is. I love the line,"dream upon your make believe and cherish your existance." If you could answer my question: What does the picture have to do with your writing? Is there any significance?