Roses | Teen Ink


April 8, 2009
By exoticfall GOLD, Windham, Maine
exoticfall GOLD, Windham, Maine
18 articles 0 photos 2 comments

I put the roses in a glass bottle
(a pink, a dark red, and a red)
and i think you were (are) the red one
but the flowers dried out and they

wilted and
like ashes (i must chase that horrible thought away)
i put them in a box (no, stop it, here i draw the line)
right underneath your picture.
the box

it contains the petals (ashes)


They don't ever really refresh
and i was surprised at
how much they could sting

The author's comments:
this piece is meant to be structured differently.

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NatalieB. GOLD said...
on May. 2 2009 at 7:31 pm
NatalieB. GOLD, Loudon, Virginia
12 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
Make your own lines, and color outside of them.

I think this is really nice! Good job!