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Under My Bare Feet

April 20, 2009
By Minderella PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
Minderella PLATINUM, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
If I tell you I love you can I keep you forever? --Aww. From the movie Casper
Also:
If you live to be 100, I want to live to be 100 minus 1 day so I never have to live a day without you. --Aww again. Of course, that's Whinnie the Pooh for ya!


The road does not end,
but rather begins
under my feet.

It is not defined,
there are no lines
under my feet.

It goes everywhere,
and nowhere
under my feet.

It rises and falls,
it winds and it calls
under my feet.

The road captures time,
memories horrid, sublime
under my feet.

The Earth is the road,
as I am told,
under my bare feet.


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KitBee SILVER said...
on May. 6 2009 at 3:07 am
KitBee SILVER, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"A fact is a simple statement that everyone believes. It is innocent, unless found guilty. A hypothesis is a novel suggestion that no one wants to believe. It is guilty, until found effective."- Edward Teller

UR AMAZING!!!! I LOVE U MINDERELLA!

on May. 1 2009 at 2:10 am
OctoberFrost SILVER, Parker, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"In a fight it does not matter who falls down the most, but who gets up last." ~Sensei Zack, and porbably someone else.

I love it!!

:)

Seriously, awesome stuff. I can't rhyme for my life, so well done.

on Apr. 30 2009 at 3:36 pm
Armando Jr Garcia BRONZE, Galloway, Ohio
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wow. get back to me please. I'll hola