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Personification be dead MAG

April 15, 2009
By Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments

Personification be dead.

“Win!” Expectation screams loud,
“Climb high, Fight.”
“Don't stop until failure is dead!”

“Think,” Intelligence announces,
“Study the outcome, be wise.”
“Ignore conscience's ramblings!”

“Hold on tight,” Love chants.
“Never give up, I am always here.”
“Hatred is a liar.”

“Hide!” Fear trembles.
“Never trust, never look back.”
“Bravery is dangerous!”

“STOP!” Authority yells.
“Personification be dead.”

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on Aug. 29 2013 at 4:48 pm
bookmouse BRONZE, Chapel Hill, North Carolina
1 article 90 photos 251 comments
Amazing and original! I've never seen anything like it! Perfect length too; one less stanza would have been too little and one more would have been too much!

Marcelao94 said...
on Apr. 28 2011 at 11:24 am
Amazing! It said everything I had in mind!

on Apr. 28 2011 at 10:06 am
queentabbiecat99 GOLD, Dardanelle, Arkansas
15 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Things aren't always what they seem.

O.O i love it can't talk VERY GOOD

Nelle PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 24 2011 at 11:02 am
Nelle PLATINUM, Crewkerne, Other
21 articles 10 photos 49 comments
Thankyou so much :)

Savi101 BRONZE said...
on Jan. 23 2011 at 5:28 pm
Savi101 BRONZE, Ellsworth, Iowa
1 article 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Person 1: "What is wrong with you?"
Person 2: "Do you want me to start alphabetically or chronologically?"

Wow, there are no words to descirbe this... I am absoloutly speechless.

on Feb. 8 2010 at 9:46 am
MayaElyashiv PLATINUM, Ramat Hasharon, Other
37 articles 4 photos 193 comments
I love this! I was definitely not expecting anything close to it when I read the title. It's very original. It's interesting how true it is, now that I think about it. Emotions really are personified in our minds (or at least in mine).

Could you maybe take a peek at some of my works? I would appreciate it very much.

shelberlynn said...
on Dec. 4 2009 at 7:45 pm
shelberlynn, Bristoville, Ohio
0 articles 0 photos 5 comments
That was really cool. I mean really cool. How on earth did you come up with that? It was fun, profound and just ... cool! I loved it! Write another one!

on May. 10 2009 at 6:34 pm
camille_1441 PLATINUM, Westerville, Ohio
31 articles 0 photos 48 comments
Wow the poem is so short but the message is huge! This is an amazing poem about the enotions that make us human and how athourity can take away those things. I like it a lot, hopefully you'll get a chance to critqe my poetry as well =)

P.S. Keep writing!