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The A, B, C's of Love

April 30, 2009
By -xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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A, b, c, d
Why don’t you love me?
E, f, g, h
Is there really so much hate?
I, j, k, l
Why are you giving me h%@
M, n, o, p
Is it possible to hate me?
Q, r, s, t
I love thee
U, v, w, x
I wonder whose you’re going to hurt next
X, y, z
Why don’t you love me?

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This article has 4 comments.

on Jun. 20 2009 at 11:49 pm
Dandelion PLATINUM, Franklin, Massachusetts
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I like this poem. It would be great if you added or subtracted some words to make it ring better.

on Jun. 14 2009 at 12:19 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I like the title of this poem. It is creative. I also like how you refrain line one in the last line. Could I give you some advice? Some people, not saying you exactly, love to write poetry and try to rhyme every time. Don't get me wrong, it's good sometimes, but all the time it starts to get hard and you get writer's block. Trying so hard to make words rhyme would make you lose the meaning of your poem. I just want to tell you that, that's all. Please don't take any offense. Anyway, I really do like how creative this poem is.

on Jun. 11 2009 at 6:48 pm
darkangel1326 GOLD, Paramount, California
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creative and hi thanks for commenting on my poem. U should try not to use thee, that's all i think need improvement:)

on May. 15 2009 at 7:07 pm
anninicole2 BRONZE, Roscoe, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
love others how you would want to be loved

It was a bit repetive... Try taking some writing tips. may sit with an english teacher and ask for tips.