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Another Dream

May 12, 2009
By Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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"You dont know what you have until its gone"

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The oak tree is over me
My chevy truck that can see.
The blue birds soaring in the sky,
my hair is flying in my eyes.

My shoes are off, and in my hands,
the sun is burning over the land.
I take a sip of lemonade,
and eat a sandwich I have made.

I look across the green valley, and then I see my best friend Callie.
We frolic and play for the rest of the day,
I forgot that she has went away.

I weep in pain, with the tears that stain.
I wake from the dream, so close it seems.
All of this I can't obtain,
what such memories, I contain...

© Liza C., Seattle, WA

The author's comments:
Hey everyone! This story is suppose to be sad, but it isn't real. I just came up with it in Language arts class. Well, I hope you like it! Thanks!
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Babygurl_101 SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 9:01 pm
Babygurl_101 SILVER, N/A, California
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Angels are the quiet girls that just havent been noticed yet&quot;<br /> &quot;The past is the past, and i am your futuer.&quot; (&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3&lt;3)

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i really like this poem!!! u definetly have talent!!!
supakewl#1 BRONZE said...
on May. 20 2009 at 2:53 am
supakewl#1 BRONZE, Fairway, Kansas
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Nice. :) :) (: (:
KassidyLeigh GOLD said...
on May. 18 2009 at 10:36 pm
KassidyLeigh GOLD, Brewer, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;There are a millions guys who will try to pick you up but only one can sweep you off your feet!&quot; -Emily Illingworth

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This is really cute and painful at the same time. It makes ytou feel both at the same time. Really cool! Check out 11:11 Memories~
Sheridan PLATINUM said...
on May. 17 2009 at 6:11 pm
Sheridan PLATINUM, Spokane, Washington
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By the time you are done reading this you will have wasted 10 seconds of your life.

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That's really good! great description it really gives me a great mental picture.
LittlestBird GOLD said...
on May. 17 2009 at 2:26 am
LittlestBird GOLD, North Bay, Other
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:) Awe, I really like this. The imagery makes it come alive!
kaura123 SILVER said...
on May. 16 2009 at 11:23 pm
kaura123 SILVER, Huntington Beach, California
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you write well. its good
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on May. 16 2009 at 2:50 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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Wow- this is amazing! Sad but good. All the rhyming throws me off at first but it ends up pulling together all the pain and hurt helping the reader to feel it much more. Wonderful.
Twilightnme SILVER said...
on May. 15 2009 at 11:51 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
6 articles 0 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;You dont know what you have until its gone&quot;

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Wow, its amazing jkjk