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May 12, 2009
By mark bethka BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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t ucks it’s head inside it’s shell


u ses it for protecion







t akes a peak out side






r elizes its safe






l eaps into the water and





e njoys a quick bath



egg

round, smooth
hatch,fried,yum
i chop the ongens, throw them in and...


omelet

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my best freind loves turtles
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mark bethka BRONZE said...
on Sep. 8 2011 at 12:32 pm
mark bethka BRONZE, Anchorage, Alaska
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hahahahaha thanks Daynene!
supakewl#1 BRONZE said...
on May. 20 2009 at 2:48 am
supakewl#1 BRONZE, Fairway, Kansas
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Diffrent but I like it. write some more weird poems.
KICK3593 PLATINUM said...
on May. 19 2009 at 3:16 am
KICK3593 PLATINUM, Roslyn Heights, New York
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Not only is it weird, but it attempts humor, which is kind of degrading in my point of view. Not to mention that this is nothing special.

Try reading the Grapes of Wrath, Chpt. 3. Its all about a turtle.



I know this is tough criticism, but I've got a say to give.
melcat SILVER said...
on May. 19 2009 at 12:38 am
melcat SILVER, Menifee, California
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well, call me narrow-minded or whatever you like, but that's just weird.



but, you know, whatever is your cup of tea... i guess.
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2009 at 10:20 pm
kmpoetgirl7 PLATINUM, Phillips, Wisconsin
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haha. cool. :) yeah, you had the second T and R switched around... oh well. good poem tho!!
xXsmileXx PLATINUM said...
on May. 18 2009 at 10:01 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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You spelled turtle wrong... but i still got it and its still a good poem. I like it.
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD said...
on May. 18 2009 at 5:01 pm
Caitlyn_ilovesoftball GOLD, Douds, Iowa
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&quot;Hello Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o,&quot; -friends<br /> &quot;Stop saying that!! My name ain&#039;t Cat-i-lynn Mill-ard-o!!&quot; -Me<br /> &quot;Okay, fine, Hello Cat.&quot;-friends<br /> (GRRRRR)<br /> ----Also----<br /> &quot;You a turtle on steroids!&quot;-friends<br /> &quot;Hahaha, I know&quot; -ME

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Interesting
Huckleberry Finn BRONZE said...
on May. 18 2009 at 1:17 pm
Huckleberry Finn BRONZE, Saint Joseph, Michigan
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you spelled turtles wrong...nice
Twilightnme SILVER said...
on May. 15 2009 at 11:57 pm
Twilightnme SILVER, Anchorage, Alaska
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wow. thatw a weird one. Ms brown must have liked it