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Dear Jerk

May 28, 2009
By ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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ZebraWithoutStripes ELITE, Blue Springs, Missouri
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To make a difference in the world, you have to be different from the world.

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Dear Jerk,
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
What were you thinking?
Dumping me
I can’t believe it’s over,
The ride of my life-
Crashed.
Idiot.
To think
I thought
you had stolen my heart
Forever.
What a joke.
You big fat jerk.
You stupid stupid boy.
Idiot.

P.S. I still love you.

© Emma L., Wyckoff, NJ

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reesha SILVER said...
on Jan. 23 2010 at 12:03 am
reesha SILVER, Rawalpindi, Other
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&quot;All our dreams can come true, if we have the courage to pursue them.&quot;<br /> Walt Disney<br /> <br /> &quot;Hakuna Matata!&quot;<br /> Lion King<br /> <br /> &quot;The British policy was &#039;unite and conquer&#039;. But I say &#039;unite and conquer&#039;.&quot;<br /> Greg Mortenson (Three Cups of Tea)

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good job! keep it up1
xXsmileXx PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 12 2009 at 5:55 pm
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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&quot;Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching&quot; ~me ;)

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LOL i love this poem! Absolutley love it! way to go!
Electricity PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 9:37 pm
Electricity PLATINUM, Bradenton, Florida
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lol, that poem is so CUTE and HILARIOUS!
Anjo! SILVER said...
on Jun. 8 2009 at 5:33 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Uhh.. wow.... that is... interesting..
Jaquie BRONZE said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 5:15 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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This is certainly one of my favorites: &quot;I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes.&quot; -2 Samuel 6:22

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Wow. That was. Amazing. It felt so real. (As I'm sure it was) I can relate to this SO much. Your writing really touches people on a personal level. I love it. Keep writing.

God bless,

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SilverDawn GOLD said...
on Jun. 7 2009 at 4:26 am
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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The last line was a bit abrupt but I like the letter-like style there =D
carriebearieforever GOLD said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 5:00 pm
carriebearieforever GOLD, Mcallen, Texas
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i agree, very direct, but very good.
ChelseaH PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 5 2009 at 2:05 am
ChelseaH PLATINUM, McFarland, Wisconsin
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i know exactly how this feels. i can relate.
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Jun. 4 2009 at 12:21 am
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Life&#039;s a mountain on a beach&quot;-Unknown<br /> &quot;Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It&#039;s remarkable how often those two traits coincide.&quot;-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

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Interesting turn at the end.. maybe a little too direct. Though if i were feeling this- I suppose it would have been in this same directness that you've captured. Awesome.