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June 8, 2009
By Rylie GOLD, Terrebonne, Oregon
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Rylie GOLD, Terrebonne, Oregon
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"Love comes when manipulation stops; when you think more about the other person than about his or her reactions to you, When you dare to reveal yourself fully, When you dare to be vulnerable"

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I was swooning over his radiance
To which was illuminating my dark eternity
Such a passionate feeling engulfed me
Distorting my mind to a vast emptiness
As his fierce gaze held me
Paralyzed in my own body
My desire to touch him was intensified
While she was still around
My craving, my fixation
Would go unsatisfied
But we both knew it wouldn't be starved
Forever

© Heather W., No., Brunswick, NJ

The author's comments:
Lets see um yet another from language arts class. In this one I had to use 5 words To make a poem which were: Swooning, radiance, illuminating, eternity, and distorting.
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unearthlyhaphazard GOLD said...
on Jul. 18 2009 at 1:04 am
unearthlyhaphazard GOLD, N/A, New York
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Intense. Your use of language is very powerful. Well done.