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Justin

July 12, 2009
By xXFadedFlowerXx GOLD, Roy, Utah
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With eyes so beautiful
you pull me in like gravity
My heart is taken over by yearning
for you to put your arms around
me
for you to hold
me
for you to look through
me
with those eyes of gold
I scream for you to notice
me
but you don't hear

© Elizabeth G., Marblehead, MA

The author's comments:
This poem is pretty self-explainatory. It's of course about a guy named Justin who I used to like , but I don't think he even knew I existed.
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jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2009 at 1:40 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

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wow. i know the same feeling( i think everyone does) and the subject made the perfect poem. great job :)
Zero_K DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 22 2009 at 10:47 pm
Zero_K DIAMOND, Moosic, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's no fun if you're not insane, otherwise you grow up to be an accountant." -Moi

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I know exactly how you feel, and actually, I think just about EVERYONE can relate to this. Bravo! ZERO