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Just Something.

July 23, 2009
By Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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I want the pleasure of
your words in my ear.


I want the warmth of
your breath on my neck.


I want the feeling of
your hands on my hips.


I want the tingle of
your lips on my chest.


I want the weight of
your body on mine.


I want the heat of
your love on my cold heart.


I want the sin of your lust,
I want the sensation of your grip,

I want you.

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Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Sep. 2 2009 at 5:50 pm
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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Haha ^_^ I pretty much just write what ever I'm feeling so I don't pick up things like that until, someone like you, point them out. :))) Which makes my happier. Thanks.
tor10jax GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2009 at 7:05 pm
tor10jax GOLD, Livingston, New Jersey
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I like this poem, too. The naarator asks for more as the poem progresses. Good job. Keep writing!
Torrzilla GOLD said...
on Aug. 8 2009 at 4:34 pm
Torrzilla GOLD, Ames, Iowa
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^_^ Thanks! Yeah I didn't have any ideas what the title should be, but I like what I put. And I'll be glad to take a look at your work ^_^
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 6 2009 at 3:00 am
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

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wow :0 you did a great job with this one! the title is a little deceiving but the content is short but powerful. nicely done :) if ya get a chance check out soma my work, i would love the opinions!