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the world and the wind...
July 18, 2009
broken and forgotten...closed, and all shut in shut
up
and shut out.
never to return to that one place called my home my room my lovely little alcove
out of the way of the world and the wind...
forgotten and broken
closed down
closed up
or just closed.
you pick. either way...
im still
gone.
© Lauren H., Johnson Creek, WI
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This article has 4 comments.
Duckie430 said...
on Aug. 26 2009 at 2:19 am
very interesting.
carolinesell PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 12 2009 at 4:29 am
thanks for commenting on my work!
anyway, i think there is a lot to think about in this poem--i really like it especially because of the way you play with the line breaks (it's one of my favorite things to do!!!)
good job!
anyway, i think there is a lot to think about in this poem--i really like it especially because of the way you play with the line breaks (it's one of my favorite things to do!!!)
good job!
jennee21_ann GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2009 at 5:18 pm
hey this is a really great piece. i think it can have a different meaning for everyone. you're really good :) would you mind checking out my work?...i would love your feedback!
<3 peace out my sista brothas