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Frostbitten Love
July 31, 2009
On a cold winter day
My heart froze in place,
And broke in two.
'Twas my fate after
Hering him say,
" I don't need you. "
I tried to move on,
But couldn't go on.
Then I met you,
And thought,
My trial was through.
My pain moved on
Even though I was wrong.
I Saw your face
And it was a beautiful face .
My Love it grew.
I wished it to show,
Cause I wanted to see
If you loved me to.
But now I know
Not to show,
My love for thee for fear of ridicule,
you see.
Even if I love you so.
© Rebecca B., Marietta, GA
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This article has 2 comments.
Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 2:09 pm
I like it a lot. The rhyming was really nice. I liked that. I can understand, but I am stuck in the past
MariaMarie DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 5 2009 at 1:20 pm
The style you chose is a lil' different but it goes good with the theme. Though I was a bit confused by the last stanza, i think i understand better now. I'm not used to the story of loving some1 right after having your heart broken by some1 else.. so i really don't know what to say. It is different though and i like the rhyming in it.
