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Frostbitten Love

July 31, 2009
By Vikki-toria SILVER, Marienville, Pennsylvania
Vikki-toria SILVER, Marienville, Pennsylvania
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On a cold winter day
My heart froze in place,
And broke in two.
'Twas my fate after
Hering him say,
" I don't need you. "
I tried to move on,
But couldn't go on.

Then I met you,
And thought,
My trial was through.
My pain moved on
Even though I was wrong.
I Saw your face
And it was a beautiful face .
My Love it grew.
I wished it to show,
Cause I wanted to see
If you loved me to.

But now I know
Not to show,
My love for thee for fear of ridicule,
you see.
Even if I love you so.

The author's comments:
This piece is about a girl who had her heart broken and then fell in love with somebody else. She is afraid that heer friends and others will ridicu;e her if they get together

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Lonleydandy said...
on Aug. 9 2009 at 2:09 pm
I like it a lot. The rhyming was really nice. I liked that. I can understand, but I am stuck in the past

on Aug. 5 2009 at 1:20 pm
MariaMarie DIAMOND, Washington Court House, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's a mountain on a beach"-Unknown
"Will: This is either madness or brilliance. Sparrow: It's remarkable how often those two traits coincide."-Pirates of the Caribbean:Curse of the Black Pearl.

The style you chose is a lil' different but it goes good with the theme. Though I was a bit confused by the last stanza, i think i understand better now. I'm not used to the story of loving some1 right after having your heart broken by some1 else.. so i really don't know what to say. It is different though and i like the rhyming in it.