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Dreamt of Being Free

July 25, 2009
By XRamirez SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
XRamirez SILVER, Round Rock, Texas
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I'll fall beneath the tide.
Maybe tonight will be the night
I'll be swept underneath into the deep
Don't even begin to weep
Just know I'll be in a better place
My life wasn't all for waste.

My fingers ran through the sky
Sunsets dazzled my eyes
The earth cushioned my feet
Until I fell I fell into the deep
My bitterness left my soul
as my life began to unfold.

So my last days have come and gone
I can't think of anything I've done wrong
My dreams of mountains beneath the sea
Is what has really come to be
I'll climb to the top to see
Life in it's sickest state of being.
Thank god I am free.


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on Oct. 5 2009 at 5:28 pm
violetfaye BRONZE, London, Other
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This is powerful, I really liked he second stanza. You have a nice flowing style