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whay love is

September 20, 2009
By shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
shakedra<3 SILVER, Carrollton, Texas
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he gazed into my eyes
he was a new part of my life

he was there from the begining
he'll be here till the end

each time he holds my hand
i better undersatnd

that love is a battlefeild
and he is my sheild

he was there through it all
from winter to fall

his beautiful hazel eyes
better than any guys

my arm soft hands
aginst my mans...
thats what love is



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on Mar. 19 2010 at 11:16 am
Zakiametoo GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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This could be nice if you would have edited it some more. There were a lot of spelling errors, but you can easily fix those.

on Oct. 9 2009 at 5:16 pm
TJ21992 PLATINUM, Penn Yan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"No matter how fast light travels, darkness is always there first, waiting!"

This is great! I love the emotion in it!