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By Anonymous

   Your passionate kiss,

Your heart-breaking lies.

The face I once loved

Is now the one I despise.

The sight of you walking

Sets me shaking because

Though my mind doesn't miss you,

My body still does.

I loathe being near you

Still I long for your touch.

I will always remember

How you hurt me so much,

So you can't trick me to thinking

That you maybe still care.

Because I know I'll be happier

When I'm sure you're not there





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book lover said...
on May. 2 2012 at 1:44 pm

This story was really well made. and i love how you made an amazing poems with the five syllables for every line. you are very creative. keep writing!

 


on May. 2 2012 at 11:45 am
curlygurlray GOLD, Visalia, California
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Favorite Quote:
you have the life you let yourself take.

I REALLY LIKE THIS BECAUSE I KNOW THE FEELING(:

LoveFrogs said...
on May. 2 2012 at 10:43 am
LoveFrogs, Waterford, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"I never received my acceptance letter to Hogwarts, so I'm leaving the Shire to become a Jedi."

Wow, that was amazing! I really liked the verse "So you can't trick me to thinking That you maybe still care". I bet that a lot of people can relate to your poem.

on Jul. 10 2011 at 1:39 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

This is what I'm feeling. Good job... you're great. Check out my work?

on Jul. 10 2011 at 2:52 am
Casual.dreamer SILVER, Bakersfield, California
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This is amazing.