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Fight MAG
I cry at night
Hoping to fight
The pain
I cry at night
Hoping to fight
The sadness
I cry at night
Hoping to fight
The weakness
But when I cry at night
I cannot fight
The madness
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Your poem had a good concept and while it's simplicity lent itself to the concept, it still lacks any sort of imagery to pull reader's into the moment. Don't just tell us about your pain, make us feel it. Bring us into the moment with strong imagery so that we don't just read how you fight, but so that we know how you fight
whatihavelost said...
on Mar. 15 2009 at 2:39 am
i understand y u didnt put your name it isnt easy being mad because your sad weak and in pain.i know.i sometimes cry myself to sleep fighting.i loved your poem it was very simple and relatable. i hope you come to a point in your life when you can stop fighting
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