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Blank Love MAG
As I look upon you
You turn around and stare
I thought you'd never see me
I thought you'd never care.
Your eyes are hard to see
But the blue stands out alone,
I can see your thoughts within them
Upon a face of stone.
I wish that I could tell you
the thoughts inside my head,
The words just won't come out
With a crooked smile instead.
I thought it was only me
Until you saw it too,
You know the truth inside me
I can't help loving you.
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jay_jayy:D GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2009 at 3:43 pm
This is such a sweet poem. Very cute and sweet. I like it! Keep writing please!
Zoev9 said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 8:23 pm
have you ever read Neruda? Poetry is more than just rhyming and descriptions its about the inner feelings, the messages portrayed. Its supposed to be about humanity.
SpiritGirl101 said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 7:56 pm
Nice choice of words. I would have never though of instead to rhyme with head. :D
harryFANatic<3 BRONZE said...
on Jun. 18 2009 at 5:31 pm
this poem is great! i hope u post more of ur work online. ur really good!
blindingeffects said...
on Nov. 20 2008 at 2:53 pm
i love the lines:
"Your eyes are hard to see
But the blue stands out alone,
I can see your thoughts within them
Upon a face of stone."
it's my favourite section, and i love the analogy of it. great piece. love the rhyming, it makes it relatable.
"Your eyes are hard to see
But the blue stands out alone,
I can see your thoughts within them
Upon a face of stone."
it's my favourite section, and i love the analogy of it. great piece. love the rhyming, it makes it relatable.
lligwock said...
on Oct. 29 2008 at 12:38 am
I like this i can totally relate to it!
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"At the touch of love everyone becomes a poet." ---Plato