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A Hearts Clock

January 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


I've been counting every hour
That I haven't seen your face
You are now the cause
Of every tear I waste

I hide it with fake laughter
A lie in every smile
Every second I wonder why
It's been such a long while

The weeks go crawling by
I long to hold you close
I'm starving for your love
And withering like a rose

It seems like forever
Yet I guess I'll wait
For I'll always want you
And that shall be my fate



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on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:46 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I saw them on a friends ipod so idk maybe

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:35 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

Those are the only two that I know of that are on Youtube. Am I correct in saying that's where you saw them?

on Jun. 3 2010 at 6:34 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

:O are you psychic or what?

on Jun. 3 2010 at 8:17 am
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

Let me guess. "Going Under" and "Bring me to life".

on Jun. 2 2010 at 10:30 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I've only seen two but i guess it's just me

on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:37 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

To each their own opinion. I like the videos as well as the music.

on Jun. 2 2010 at 7:33 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I don't like the music videos though just the songs

on Jun. 2 2010 at 5:34 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

It's one of mine. But Haunted or Tourniquet have to be my top two.

on Jun. 2 2010 at 5:31 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

I love them:) My favorite song is bring me back to life:)

on Jun. 2 2010 at 3:49 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

My life is a tragedy, to be honest. But as the ever-faithful Evanescence song lyrics proclaim: "But who can decide what they dream, and dream I do."  The song is Taking Over Me - Evanescence.

on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:14 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you:)            

on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:13 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Sounds tragic i'm sorry

on Jun. 1 2010 at 8:12 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Seems like such a tragedy i'm sorry

on Jun. 1 2010 at 10:50 am
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

Sadly, no one can ever know. Although I can proclaim its finale to the world, it is forbidden of me to ever speak why.

on May. 31 2010 at 8:25 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you and why is that Kosukovu?

on May. 31 2010 at 7:46 pm
KosuKovu13 SILVER, Hobart, Indiana
8 articles 4 photos 51 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Tormented by the demon of literature." ~ Gaston Leroux, author of the Phantom of the Opera

Again, a wonderful piece. As I'm sure we all know, at some point in time, our hearts run out of patience and time, don't you agree? I believe figuartively, mine is coming to an end.

on May. 25 2010 at 1:12 pm
JoetheBlanc GOLD, Roswell, Georgia
14 articles 0 photos 37 comments

Favorite Quote:
"the shadow proves the sunshine!"

great poem!

on May. 23 2010 at 7:13 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you jacob it means alot to me

JacobC GOLD said...
on May. 21 2010 at 6:53 am
JacobC GOLD, Belgium, Wisconsin
10 articles 4 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Am I indecisive? Well, yes and no." -Anonymous

My favorite poem that you made.

on May. 20 2010 at 10:30 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Thank you Danny9:)