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Say Good-Bye

January 28, 2010
By darkangel09 GOLD, South Huntington, New York
darkangel09 GOLD, South Huntington, New York
13 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."-Voltaire


when you look around...What do you see?
Kids running in the streets?
Yes.
But are they playing?
No
Do you see people?
Yes but they're not calm
They're running for their lives
Weilding guns
You see...it has begon...Everything is ending...
The worlds in kayos. Poeple are running for their lives

Theirs an epic battle taking place
One we cant win
A fight that who ever wins...man-kind is done for

Look around and say good-bye
Because the time has come...
Enless you stand and fight...b ut will you?
That choice is up to you



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on Sep. 29 2010 at 4:12 pm
mskullgirl GOLD, Waban, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
All that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream -Edgar Allen Poe

Really good. It sort of reminds me of the holocaust

on Aug. 31 2010 at 8:53 pm
darkangel09 GOLD, South Huntington, New York
13 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."-Voltaire

thanks. i'm glad you like them

on Aug. 31 2010 at 12:21 pm
__horizon133 PLATINUM, Portage, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"laugh, and the world laughs with you. laugh hysterically, and for no apparent reason, and they will leave you alone." anonymous

wow. i've read several of yur peices now and i love all of them! this was awsome!

on Aug. 29 2010 at 11:07 pm
darkangel09 GOLD, South Huntington, New York
13 articles 0 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I do not agree with what you have to say, but I'll defend to the death your right to say it."-Voltaire

Thanks. Yea, i'm working on the spelling thing...kind of faild it in school

I am defiantly going too


on Aug. 15 2010 at 9:06 pm
sleeplessdreamer PLATINUM, Raleigh, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
"I have always wanted to write in such a way that people say, 'I have always thought that but never found the words for it.'" -anonymous

This is a very well constructed poem. I especially loved the beginning. It took my breath away quite literally. The only thing I would say is there are some spelling errors that are kind of blatant, but other than that, your poem is fabulous. You definitely have talent. 

Check out my work if you ever get the chance. I would really appreciate it. :)