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The Pain in My Heart

May 9, 2010
By Snowflake23b SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
Snowflake23b SILVER, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Everyone wants to go to heaven, but No one wants to Die"
~ Not written by Me


Pain
My flesh in ripped and burnt away,
my heart is torn from inside me,
blood covers me, all of me, cold, but some still warm,
some still new, this brings life, blood it does, and as much as you take I will still be left here,I may not be alive, but i am not dead,
I am stuck in darkness's mist, death's mist,
It will not release me, or let me go,
It loves me, it holds me tight, and i lay under it's cold mint breath,I will never be let go, not from it, never in internity, always stuck in its dark mist and cobwebs of untrue and fake love, my heart shall always be stuck and burried there forever.


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on Aug. 5 2010 at 9:24 am
Egyptiangirl13 GOLD, Kansas City, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
\"either write something worth reading or do something worth writing. -Benjamin Franklin

\"If columbus would have turned back, no one would have blamed him. No one would have remembered him either.\"

\"If music be the food of love, play on.\"

wow this is very deep with an amazing flow:) this is very intense, yet somehow relaxing. great job, i really enjoyed it!! please check out some of my work if you get the chance (all comments and ratings are appreciated)