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May 8, 2010
By Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna


We are all thieves
whether or not
we are caught.
You stole my heart
and I stole time,
You stole my eye
and I stole breaths,
You stole a hug
and I stole grins.
Who said stealing was bad?
Who said it would feel so good?
So good to smile at him
Want to follow on a crazy whim.
Talk of good days in musicals and plays
whether we were onstage or not.
To not steal the moments in life
would be a crime,

wouldn't it?



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aveawave GOLD said...
on Aug. 28 2011 at 9:43 pm
aveawave GOLD, Woolwich, New Jersey
10 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Be the angel you're sworn to be: spread your wings and fly" :)

I really like this! would you mind checking out soem of mine? 

on Jul. 23 2011 at 5:18 pm
ElleNicole BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
2 articles 0 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
"My role in society, or any artist's or poet's role, is to try and express what we all feel. Not to tell people how to feel. Not as a preacher, not as a leader, but as a reflection of us all."

Wow, this is actually good, unlike a lot of stuff on here. Awesome job.

I'd love it if you could check out my poem 'Change' ... thanks =)


on Mar. 19 2011 at 9:02 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

Really nice job. This is so inspirational! My favorite lines are:

"Talk of good days in musicals and plays whether we were onstage or not."

I loved this poem!


nancyyy BRONZE said...
on Mar. 1 2011 at 7:24 am
nancyyy BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
2 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The bigger the dreams, the smaller the competition"

"To not steal the moments in life
would be a crime"

A very cute poem. I like that line best. Reading this poem easilly brings a smile to my face.


on Sep. 8 2010 at 6:21 pm
pencilchick GOLD, San Jose, California
14 articles 1 photo 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
The sleep of reason produces monsters -fransisco goya

Good twist on a wor that otherwise is got a darker meaning!!!!

on Aug. 25 2010 at 2:42 pm
ericchristmas12 SILVER, Laurel, Maryland
6 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If everyone practised being themselves, instead of pretending to be what they aren't, there would be peace." -- John Lennon

I love the whole concept behind this. Good stuff. =D

on Aug. 25 2010 at 12:51 am
chrisbriones GOLD, Anaheim, California
11 articles 0 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I believe nothing can be justly and completely explained by words."

You have such a unique and admirable perspective in all your poems. Different--reminiscent, subtle, smooth, provoking, beckoning, entrancing, and more and more.

on Aug. 21 2010 at 7:48 pm
ElizabethBlack PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
40 articles 7 photos 15 comments
This is really cute, but even more creative.  You have the ability to take an idea most people see a set way, and apply a completely different meaning to it.

on Aug. 20 2010 at 11:44 am
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
62 articles 1 photo 881 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

It would definitely be a crime!

I love this piece.

I favor you. Keep writing.


on Aug. 16 2010 at 9:34 am
MelanieLouise PLATINUM, Plymouth, Minnesota
37 articles 0 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
to live a creative life, we must lose our fear of being wrong

i love the cleverness of it. the first few lines are my favorite :) keep writing, Mel

ayaman said...
on Aug. 14 2010 at 11:38 pm

It flows really well until the last few lines, where it gets a bit choppy. I like the idea, but I feel like if you ended off with a sort of drifting thought, rather than a question, it might work better. Don't get me wrong, I liked the poem, but I'm not a big fan of questions as endings for poems (anymore, at least, I may have done the same in my older poems) but that might just be because my creative writing teacher always ended with questions and it sort of irritated me. Anyhoo, it's just an opinion, take from it what you will, and in the end it is your work. Just a little constructive criticism.

Overall though, it was really good.


on Aug. 11 2010 at 10:57 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

definitely will, have to load it up, but i have soo much more on the loading dock, per say, i have no idea when it wil get published!

on Aug. 11 2010 at 8:57 pm
J-blotting-ink SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
8 articles 6 photos 20 comments

Marlyre! I found you!

You know I love you and your work. You should put up the one about the spotlight, if you haven't already.


_truth GOLD said...
on Aug. 11 2010 at 6:29 pm
_truth GOLD, Prospect, Kentucky
16 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
"it's better to be hated for who you are, than to be loved for what your not..."
"life isn't measured by the number of breaths you take but by the number of moments that take your breath away"

i completely agree with this. good job

on Aug. 10 2010 at 6:05 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

hey, thanks for commenting!

on Aug. 9 2010 at 9:54 pm
JakeShaw PLATINUM, Atlanta, Georgia
23 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
When you're in a night that seems almost devoid of stars and you look but can't find someone to help you see. Look for that lonely star and let it guide you until you find the light. (anonymous)

I love how the fast pace of the poem keeps a vivid image of what's going on in our head!