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I'll Pray For This Planet To Never Pass

June 16, 2010
By Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
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Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"


I fear for you.
and I'll be here for you.
And I'll never leave,
even when you scream at me
to go. I'll stay.
You can never drive me away.
When you have no faith I'll pray in your stead;
fight the demons in your head
for you. And win.
Because when you are weak
I will hold you tightly
and imagine a mighty sword.
And I'll shield you with my body
from the coming storms.
And keep you warm
In the fields of snow.
I'll pick you up and run with you
when you are too slow
to get away
from the beasts that plague you.
I'll hoist you up onto my back
and have away down primrose path.
Which turns to blackberry brambles.
And the straight bricks, they ramble so.
But I will keep you safe with me,
until the time will come for me to go.
And then I will still stay,
long past my worn~out welcome's death.
I'll defend you with my each dying breath.
And keep you from ever breathing your own last.
For you are a day, which I pray will never pass.


The author's comments:
I hope for this little poem to make people understand that we should make this planet forever last.

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Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 8 2010 at 10:20 am
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
30 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

Thanks guys >_<

IvyVine SILVER said...
on Jul. 4 2010 at 9:46 pm
IvyVine SILVER, Unknown, Indiana
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Really good, sounds kind of like a song. I loved it!

on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:23 pm
destinedhearts SILVER, Waianae, Hawaii
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Favorite Quote:
"with you by my side nothing is impossible" HE<i

i really love this :) awesome job!!

 

--kanani


on Jun. 21 2010 at 12:52 pm
PrincessPineapple GOLD, Chesapeake, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"To love someone is to learn the song that is in their heart, and sing it to them when they have forgotten." ~unknown

wow!! this is really good! check out my stuff?

Babie PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2010 at 2:05 am
Babie PLATINUM, Modesto, California
30 articles 0 photos 58 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I Hate Kid's I have to many realitives.....ahhhhh!"

I will so chech out your poems thank you >_<

on Jun. 20 2010 at 1:59 pm
Comfortably_Numb DIAMOND, Orchard Park, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Fairy tales do not teach children that dragons exist. Children already know that dragons exist. Fairy tales tell children that dragons can be killed.

this is simply beautiful. there really arent any words that would suffice to describe it. it is by far one of the best poems i've ever read. please, keep writing. and if you get the chance, check out some of my poems, id really love your opinion :)